Comment from w.j.debi

Excellent

I love the fun you have poking fun at things and this time it's political things. Ned and Pons always put a fresh spin on things, especially Ned. The sense of humor is great. It will be interesting to see where this goes.

 Comment Written 03-Sep-2023

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reply by the author on 03-Sep-2023

I hope we can stay in the fray between Sleepy Joe and The Donald.

reply by w.j.debi on 03-Sep-2023

It is almost too crazy to be real, but here we are...

Comment from Faith Williams

Excellent

Let the upcoming election shenanigans begin! Since politics has devolved into little more than a farce, exploring its comedic value seems the logical thing to do. I couldn't stop laughing about the line regarding the Pajamer Party and the Donner Party. What fitting party names. Thanks for sharing this humorous script, Bill. Can't wait to see what happens next.

 Comment Written 03-Sep-2023

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reply by the author on 03-Sep-2023

Scenes 2 and 3 are already posted, Faith. Thanks for checking this out.

Comment from LJbutterfly

Excellent

This is a humorous script, but I'm so glad I won't have to vote. Both Lor'de and Zora are scary, and as funny as the eight candidates we saw debate last week on TV. Sorry they didn't make it. I'm looking forward to watching their campaigns.

 Comment Written 01-Sep-2023

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reply by the author on 01-Sep-2023

Voting will be easy as you will see.

Comment from JSD

Excellent

Ah, I see. I read the latest this morning. Now it all makes more sense. Thanks for re-promoting to put it into context. Most enjoyable satire, of sorts.

 Comment Written 01-Sep-2023

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reply by the author on 01-Sep-2023

Thank you, John.

Comment from Barry Penfold

Excellent

This was a real hoot. Love the character Ned and his switched on political view. Lol. Kept me interested until the end. Looking for more. Have a great day.
Regards
Barry Penfold.

 Comment Written 01-Sep-2023

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reply by the author on 01-Sep-2023

Thank you, Barry. Forward to the debates.

Comment from fubars

Exceptional

Hi Bill, I really enjoyed your opening scene here, especially with it being set in an abandoned mall. And your characters are unique in their own right. Your speeches really send a message of what's really wrong with our country in such a creative manner.Look forward to more.Take care, Dave

 Comment Written 01-Sep-2023

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reply by the author on 01-Sep-2023

Thank you, Dave. I hope to keep you entertained as I send the boys through the election.

reply by fubars on 01-Sep-2023

Hi Bill, look forward to their journey.

Comment from nomi338

Excellent

OMG! It is about to be on! There is going to be a hot time in the old town tonight, tomorrow and on into next week. Pons and Ned have better get a good grip for the battle that is about to take place. I never imagined the two of them would square off in opposite camps.

 Comment Written 22-Jul-2023

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reply by the author on 22-Jul-2023

I am totally spit balling through this whole thing.

reply by nomi338 on 22-Jul-2023

Dig deeply into your bag of tricks. You dug a hole, and it is going to be fun to see you try and find your way out.

Comment from Jasmine Girl

Excellent

Here is a typo:
I do hjave a clone -> I do have a clone

I'm glad you are back working on this silly election script. I like this one a lot. Keep writing.

Well done.

 Comment Written 20-Jul-2023

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reply by the author on 21-Jul-2023

Thanks, Ljisa. : )

Comment from Iza Deleanu

Excellent

La Divina Comedia politics and politically correctness. The old war between candidates. Thank you for sharing and good luck with your writings I had a laugh.

 Comment Written 20-Jul-2023

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reply by the author on 20-Jul-2023

Thanks, Iza

Comment from lyenochka

Excellent

I'm these ladies seem a little too desperate for running mates. But I do think we could really use some real Electable third party candidates! Hope we can get rid of the old two party system!

 Comment Written 20-Jul-2023

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reply by the author on 20-Jul-2023

Ned screams desperation.