Pura Vida in my mind
Costa Rica11 total reviews
Comment from Karen Cherry Threadgill
I want to go there myself. One of these days. Did you need shots? How is their healthcare do you know?
You described this place so well. I can see the monkeys. And I can here those intrepid souls going down the zipline. Well done. Karen
reply by the author on 20-Nov-2023
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I want to go there myself. One of these days. Did you need shots? How is their healthcare do you know?
You described this place so well. I can see the monkeys. And I can here those intrepid souls going down the zipline. Well done. Karen
Comment Written 15-Nov-2023
reply by the author on 20-Nov-2023
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Yes is the best place on planet earth, and nobody asked me about any shots. I think their healthcare is good and free:)
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
What an amazing place to take a holiday and it sounds like you recharged your batteries here at a difficult time in your life. I loved your vivid descriptions here tat took me to a place I shall probably never visit.
This is my favourite line:
. . .a curious child deepening its toes in the white embroideries of the crashing waves.
I wish you luck with the contest. Love Dolly x
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What an amazing place to take a holiday and it sounds like you recharged your batteries here at a difficult time in your life. I loved your vivid descriptions here tat took me to a place I shall probably never visit.
This is my favourite line:
. . .a curious child deepening its toes in the white embroideries of the crashing waves.
I wish you luck with the contest. Love Dolly x
Comment Written 20-Jul-2023
Comment from Wendy G
A very descriptive short story and one can imagine this place of peace and beauty being very restorative and uplifting. Nature and its beauty and power have that effect. Best wishes for your entry.
Wendy
reply by the author on 23-Jul-2023
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A very descriptive short story and one can imagine this place of peace and beauty being very restorative and uplifting. Nature and its beauty and power have that effect. Best wishes for your entry.
Wendy
Comment Written 20-Jul-2023
reply by the author on 23-Jul-2023
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Thank you so much Wendy I really appreciated
Comment from BethShelby
You have described this place well and turned this into a story by telling why you wanted to come here. The place seems idyllic and make me want to go there as well. Nicely written. Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 23-Jul-2023
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You have described this place well and turned this into a story by telling why you wanted to come here. The place seems idyllic and make me want to go there as well. Nicely written. Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 20-Jul-2023
reply by the author on 23-Jul-2023
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Thank you so much, this place is magical
Comment from w.j.debi
You make it sound so heavenly. Excellent descriptions of the beach and surf. Watching the birds and the monkeys sounds exciting and calming at the same moment. You make me wish I were there.
Best of luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 23-Jul-2023
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You make it sound so heavenly. Excellent descriptions of the beach and surf. Watching the birds and the monkeys sounds exciting and calming at the same moment. You make me wish I were there.
Best of luck in the contest.
Comment Written 20-Jul-2023
reply by the author on 23-Jul-2023
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Thank you so much for your insightful review:) the place is heaven.
Comment from jmdg1954
Pura Vida in my mind...
This paradise the way you've written simply seems like so, a paradise! Be it alone, or with a loved one, you've written it as heaven on earth and could very well be a commercial for Costa Rica.
I've spoken with a couple of people who have vacationed there and two words still come to mind; beautiful and zip lining (I guess that's actually 3 words).
Wonderful post and I hope you enjoy it again on your next travel.
Cheers,
John
reply by the author on 23-Jul-2023
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Pura Vida in my mind...
This paradise the way you've written simply seems like so, a paradise! Be it alone, or with a loved one, you've written it as heaven on earth and could very well be a commercial for Costa Rica.
I've spoken with a couple of people who have vacationed there and two words still come to mind; beautiful and zip lining (I guess that's actually 3 words).
Wonderful post and I hope you enjoy it again on your next travel.
Cheers,
John
Comment Written 20-Jul-2023
reply by the author on 23-Jul-2023
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Thank you so much John. It's been 5 years since I'm planning this trip, and last year I did and I think it will be my Christmas to go destination, if I get the rich prince:)
Comment from Paul Manton
Riu Guanacaste: Eat, Pray, Love is, I suspect, a place every city dweller or exhausted worker, should visit annually - but not when you are there, or that would ruin your paradise!
So many places used to be like that - even in the 1970s there were undiscovered tropical beaches known only to a handful of hippie adventurers - now they are multi -million dollar resorts with skyline hotels and no room left on beaches littered with tourists - so we must keep your paradise secret!
Your description of the island is so sumptuous - so many senses are brought into play - you see the birds breakfasting, the monkeys playing; you feel the wind ruffling your hair, the ocean 'playing hide and seek with your body'; you hear the trills of the birds and the symphony of the waves.
You persevered with the tides in order to find a way to swim safely - and then you describe the whole experience in spiritual terms: to be reborn, leaving your sorrow and loss behind - like the little mermaid - but in your case, a story without regret. Instead a rediscovery of Eden.
Thank you for sharing your Pura Vida with us.
Paul
reply by the author on 23-Jul-2023
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Riu Guanacaste: Eat, Pray, Love is, I suspect, a place every city dweller or exhausted worker, should visit annually - but not when you are there, or that would ruin your paradise!
So many places used to be like that - even in the 1970s there were undiscovered tropical beaches known only to a handful of hippie adventurers - now they are multi -million dollar resorts with skyline hotels and no room left on beaches littered with tourists - so we must keep your paradise secret!
Your description of the island is so sumptuous - so many senses are brought into play - you see the birds breakfasting, the monkeys playing; you feel the wind ruffling your hair, the ocean 'playing hide and seek with your body'; you hear the trills of the birds and the symphony of the waves.
You persevered with the tides in order to find a way to swim safely - and then you describe the whole experience in spiritual terms: to be reborn, leaving your sorrow and loss behind - like the little mermaid - but in your case, a story without regret. Instead a rediscovery of Eden.
Thank you for sharing your Pura Vida with us.
Paul
Comment Written 20-Jul-2023
reply by the author on 23-Jul-2023
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Thank you so much Paul and congrats in winning the second place for Doomsday
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Wrong Paul. I reviewed that and commended it highly - but I'm Paul Manton and wasn't up for that contest.
Let's hope you can congratulate me for another one!
Paul
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Oopsie:) sorry I am drunk from that cocktail:)
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tsk!
Comment from davisr (Rhonda)
Wow, mystery writer. This short story packs quite a punch. I don't know what emotional roller coaster you've been on my friend, but it comes through in your story.
Also coming through is the wonder of God and His creation, nature. I can tell you really connected with Costa Rica. I'm not sure what prompted you to go there, but I'm glad you did, and I'm glad you shared your experience with us.
Vivid imagery and well chosen words mark this piece and paint a beautiful picture of the place and the feelings it inspired in you.
Best of luck in the contest,
Rhonda
reply by the author on 23-Jul-2023
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Wow, mystery writer. This short story packs quite a punch. I don't know what emotional roller coaster you've been on my friend, but it comes through in your story.
Also coming through is the wonder of God and His creation, nature. I can tell you really connected with Costa Rica. I'm not sure what prompted you to go there, but I'm glad you did, and I'm glad you shared your experience with us.
Vivid imagery and well chosen words mark this piece and paint a beautiful picture of the place and the feelings it inspired in you.
Best of luck in the contest,
Rhonda
Comment Written 19-Jul-2023
reply by the author on 23-Jul-2023
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Thank you so much Rhonda, God wanted me to go there for a long time, and finally I did it:)
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Good for you!!
Comment from Mario PIERRE
Beautifully narrated story. The reader actually gets a close glimpse of the natural beauty of that place. The descriptions are vivid and not overdone. You used most of the human senses here, touch, vision, and hearing...which is what makes it a great story.
Pure and simple life indeed!!!
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reply by the author on 23-Jul-2023
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Beautifully narrated story. The reader actually gets a close glimpse of the natural beauty of that place. The descriptions are vivid and not overdone. You used most of the human senses here, touch, vision, and hearing...which is what makes it a great story.
Pure and simple life indeed!!!
This rating does not count towards story rating or author rank.
The highest and the lowest rating are not included in calculations.
Comment Written 19-Jul-2023
reply by the author on 23-Jul-2023
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Thank you so much for your encouraging review.
Comment from bob cullen
Sounds like Heaven. Just one question. Where is it? Please tell me, it's close to Australia and the airfare is free. My bags are packed.
Seriously, this is a superb write. Your descriptions have me wanting to apply for migration.
reply by the author on 19-Jul-2023
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Sounds like Heaven. Just one question. Where is it? Please tell me, it's close to Australia and the airfare is free. My bags are packed.
Seriously, this is a superb write. Your descriptions have me wanting to apply for migration.
Comment Written 19-Jul-2023
reply by the author on 19-Jul-2023
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Take me with you:) that where I want 2 live. I'm going again this Christmas hope to see you there:)