Comment from Karen Cherry Threadgill

Excellent

Excellent poetry. Good writing. I wondered why all lines except the first line rhymed. The concept is great. My first time seeing this type of poem. I want to do one now! I am learning so much here.
Karen

 Comment Written 03-Oct-2023

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reply by the author on 05-Oct-2023

Thank you, Karen, sorry for the late reply, I have been away, and need to go again, I hope you have fun trying this form, I know I did, as always very much appreciated****kahpot

reply by Karen Cherry Threadgill on 05-Oct-2023

Yes, I will try it sooner or later.
Be careful out there in the cold cruel world. Karen

Comment from harmony13

Excellent

The author's words flow and connect well. I found these words to filled
with peace. I enjoyed the line "children view, color free" a phrase that
all should practice! The artwork is awesome and compliment the
words of this poem. The poem has a great message to the world!

 Comment Written 20-Jul-2023

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reply by the author on 20-Jul-2023

Thank you so very much

Comment from Eleri

Excellent

This poem has the correct structure for a nonet and generally reads well. The rhyming was a good idea but I feel that you have made the poem sound a bit clunky by doing it. I think that if you had abandoned some of the rhyming (maybe made it rhyme every other line perhaps) you could have used clearer language. However, the poem is generally good and I do like it so good luck in the contest
Eleri

 Comment Written 20-Jul-2023

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reply by the author on 20-Jul-2023

Thank you very much

Comment from Bill Schott

Excellent

This nonet, In My Sleep, has the proper formatting and sees some productive dreaming going on where the situations and realities which make us happy, are real. Nice.

 Comment Written 20-Jul-2023

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reply by the author on 20-Jul-2023

Thank you so very much

Comment from Mario PIERRE

Excellent

I like the presentation. The message and the quality of the poem are great. I especially liked the fact that you started with the word; "I", and ended with: WE.
A serious contender for the contest!!!

 Comment Written 20-Jul-2023

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reply by the author on 20-Jul-2023

Thank you so very much

Comment from persevere

Excellent

Perfect syllable count in this nonet and an entrancing dream. How wonderful it would be to have clean air, freedom and diminished anger!

 Comment Written 20-Jul-2023

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reply by the author on 20-Jul-2023

Thank you very much

Comment from Dolly'sPoems

Excellent

Your well chosen words have formed a perfect nonet here with a valuable message. I hope this is not a dream but becomes reality and the only was to achieve it is to forget the sins of the past and move on. I enjoyed the sentiment here, love Dolly x

 Comment Written 19-Jul-2023

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reply by the author on 20-Jul-2023

Thank you so very much

Comment from Michelle D. Carr

Excellent

Wonderful dream made clear and in a few words. You used a theme which is universally felt. It was tricky to get this across in a nonet poem but you did it. Thank you for this enjoyable read.

 Comment Written 19-Jul-2023

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reply by the author on 19-Jul-2023

Thank you so very much

Comment from Alexandra Trovato

Excellent

This is a glorious nonet topic. I have the same dream and I believe that thoughts become things. So hopefully what is described in your well written poem, will be a reality someday soon. Best wishes!

 Comment Written 19-Jul-2023

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reply by the author on 19-Jul-2023

Thank you so very much

Comment from Rachelle Allen

Excellent

What a beautiful visual presentation this is --so symmetrical and neatly displayed. And what a SUPER beautiful message! This WOULD be the most beautiful of dreams to come true. Hopefully, in our lifetime, it will be a reality.

I wish you such luck in the Nonet Poem contest. I can see this one as an easy winner!

 Comment Written 19-Jul-2023

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reply by the author on 19-Jul-2023

Thank you so very much

reply by Rachelle Allen on 19-Jul-2023

My pleasure!!