2023 Gypsy's Haiku
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15 total reviews
Comment from Douglas Goff
This is so very nice and haunted. The dark pictures and font color scheme add to the mood.
I enjoyed this one and felt that it was lacking something it really needed. Hmmm....what could that be?
Oh yes, A six star rating!
Douglas.
reply by the author on 21-Jan-2024
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This is so very nice and haunted. The dark pictures and font color scheme add to the mood.
I enjoyed this one and felt that it was lacking something it really needed. Hmmm....what could that be?
Oh yes, A six star rating!
Douglas.
Comment Written 20-Jan-2024
reply by the author on 21-Jan-2024
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Wow, I'm speechless.. another six, I really appreciate it. The only other fanstorian who goes through my old poems is karenina.
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Comment from kahpot
Beautifully presented, one can imagine the bows and leaves following the sun, something we do not see or think about very often, though it is part of their life source, very well written****kahpot
reply by the author on 19-Jul-2023
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Beautifully presented, one can imagine the bows and leaves following the sun, something we do not see or think about very often, though it is part of their life source, very well written****kahpot
Comment Written 19-Jul-2023
reply by the author on 19-Jul-2023
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Thank you, Kym, I appreciate your time and review.
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Comment from aryr
What an amazing haiku, Gypsy. The dual pictures of the bent tree were awesome and the picture of the dragon flies were fantastic. I loved your words because they brought to life the tree. Blessed Be n Hugs!!!
reply by the author on 19-Jul-2023
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What an amazing haiku, Gypsy. The dual pictures of the bent tree were awesome and the picture of the dragon flies were fantastic. I loved your words because they brought to life the tree. Blessed Be n Hugs!!!
Comment Written 19-Jul-2023
reply by the author on 19-Jul-2023
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Thank you, Aryr, I appreciate your time and review. Blessed be.
Gypsy hugs
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Most welcome, Gypsy.
Comment from barbara.wilkey
Yes, the leaves of bent trees, or all trees would be full of the departing sun's dusk. I enjoyed the imagery of this poem. Thank you for sharing this total package with us.
reply by the author on 19-Jul-2023
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Yes, the leaves of bent trees, or all trees would be full of the departing sun's dusk. I enjoyed the imagery of this poem. Thank you for sharing this total package with us.
Comment Written 19-Jul-2023
reply by the author on 19-Jul-2023
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Thank you very much for your excellent review and kind words.
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Comment from shelley kaye
bent tree bows to the sunset - i like that image...
cool pic of the tree "bowing", too!
a great haiku!
thank you for sharing
shelley :)
reply by the author on 19-Jul-2023
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bent tree bows to the sunset - i like that image...
cool pic of the tree "bowing", too!
a great haiku!
thank you for sharing
shelley :)
Comment Written 19-Jul-2023
reply by the author on 19-Jul-2023
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Thank you very much for your excellent review and kind words.
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Comment from patcelaw
This is such a beautiful work that you put up here you have presented it beautifully. You have a real gift for writing in Japanese poetry formats. I wish you the very best with all of your writing. Patricia.
reply by the author on 19-Jul-2023
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This is such a beautiful work that you put up here you have presented it beautifully. You have a real gift for writing in Japanese poetry formats. I wish you the very best with all of your writing. Patricia.
Comment Written 19-Jul-2023
reply by the author on 19-Jul-2023
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Thank you very much for your excellent review and kind words.
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Comment from Pearl Edwards
I love this haiku Gypsy, especially the final line of
leaves full of dusk.
Very creative and beautifully descriptive. A lovely presentation, enjoyed it. cheers,
valda
reply by the author on 19-Jul-2023
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I love this haiku Gypsy, especially the final line of
leaves full of dusk.
Very creative and beautifully descriptive. A lovely presentation, enjoyed it. cheers,
valda
Comment Written 19-Jul-2023
reply by the author on 19-Jul-2023
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Thank you very much for your excellent review and kind words.
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Comment from JSD
Beautiful, tender, gentle language, perfectly metaphorical. Love the way the tree gives subservience to the sun. And I love the pun in bows/boughs. And then the last line caps it all. Excellent.
reply by the author on 19-Jul-2023
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Beautiful, tender, gentle language, perfectly metaphorical. Love the way the tree gives subservience to the sun. And I love the pun in bows/boughs. And then the last line caps it all. Excellent.
Comment Written 19-Jul-2023
reply by the author on 19-Jul-2023
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Thank you for the insightful and kind review. Good night good day
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Comment from lyenochka
The sun's parting rays are reflected on the trees of the bowing tree. It really looks like the tree is bowing. There's something reverent about the picture and we could take note of these beautiful moments in life and be filled.
reply by the author on 19-Jul-2023
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The sun's parting rays are reflected on the trees of the bowing tree. It really looks like the tree is bowing. There's something reverent about the picture and we could take note of these beautiful moments in life and be filled.
Comment Written 18-Jul-2023
reply by the author on 19-Jul-2023
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Thank you for the insightful and kind review. Good night good day
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Comment from Alexandra Trovato
I love this! It reminds me of the trees we have around here. When we moved from NY to PA I noticed the trees here were wiggly. I started taking pictures of them and drawing them too. I love the words you choose they are perfect with the entire presentation and images. I don't know how to put images at the bottom of my poems maybe you can explain that to me some day it is so cool.
Unless it's a gypsy secret lol then it's ok
love
Alexan :)) x
reply by the author on 19-Jul-2023
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I love this! It reminds me of the trees we have around here. When we moved from NY to PA I noticed the trees here were wiggly. I started taking pictures of them and drawing them too. I love the words you choose they are perfect with the entire presentation and images. I don't know how to put images at the bottom of my poems maybe you can explain that to me some day it is so cool.
Unless it's a gypsy secret lol then it's ok
love
Alexan :)) x
Comment Written 18-Jul-2023
reply by the author on 19-Jul-2023
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Thank you for the insightful and kind review. Good night or good day
Love
Marival