Comment from Karen Cherry Threadgill

Excellent

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 Comment Written 14-Sep-2023

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reply by the author on 14-Sep-2023

Aw, thank you!

Comment from eliz100

Excellent

This is another excellent chapter. The hook at the end is great. I want to keep reading. I do not see any room for improvement. Have a blessed day.

On to the next chapter...

 Comment Written 07-Aug-2023

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reply by the author on 12-Aug-2023

Thank you for the excellent review and for taking the time to catch up, Elizabeth.
Blessings to you and yours,
Sal XOs

Comment from Sankey

Exceptional

Sorry, I missed this. Fortunately, I am loaded with Phoney Money so big rewards are not necessary. I am glad I caught this. I hope this lawyer is an undercover good guy and not just after big bucks.

 Comment Written 01-Aug-2023

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reply by the author on 02-Aug-2023

Thank you so much for the lovely review and generous stars, Geoff! I really appreciate you catching up! Blessings to you always,
Sal XOs

Comment from Father Flaps

Exceptional

Hi Sally,
I enjoyed the section about the reunion between Tammy and her mother & sister. And that she wants to focus on Christmas instead of all the details of her abduction. I had no trouble picturing the scene at the airport, or the walk across the field and the approaching sedan, horn beeping all the while.
I wonder what a tuna melt tastes like. Here's one of my favorite sandwiches, being a big-time seafood fan. First, I squeeze all the water out of a can of flaked white tuna. Then, I cut up a good tomato into small pieces, and mix it in with the tuna, adding a heaping tablespoon of mayonnaise. (Homemade mayo is best!) A generous sprinkling of pepper and a bit of fresh lemon juice will give it the final touch. It's dee-lishus! Winter or summer!
Then back to Fee, in captivity. I found it surprising that he'd be lusting after Sally...
"Yes, I'm acquainted with her," Fee said. "I wish it had been more... intimate."
He's got his 5th lawyer now, Lou Crenshaw, who gives him the lowdown on Sally Law...
"Apparently, she is the sole heiress of Andre Dupree."
And, another surprise, Fee has heard of the deceased artist...
Fee leaned forward in his seat, glued to every word. "As in--Louisiana artist Andre Dupree?"
But the ending seems to hint that Fee may try to have Sally killed... how and why?
"Fee studied her photo with interest. For he saw clearly--now--his ticket to ride: Detective Sally Law. His lust turned like an oiled hinge to murderous intent."
How will he maneuver such a crime? Lawyer Crenshaw?
Great chapter, Sally!
Hugs,
Kimbob

 Comment Written 28-Jul-2023

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reply by the author on 29-Jul-2023

Two chapters in one week! I am super blessed, my friend. Your tuna salad qsoumds much like my own. For the melt : just scoop your tuna salad on buttered bread and top with shredded cheese you like and pan grill. I like cheddar or Havarti.

So glad you're enjoying the book as I come to close in August, God willing.
Sending you my best today as always,
Sal XOs

Comment from Teri7

Excellent

This is a really great chapter! You used great descriptive words and very good dialogue. Each time I read one of your chapters I get so excited waiting for the next one! love and blessings, teri

 Comment Written 27-Jul-2023

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reply by the author on 27-Jul-2023

Thank you for the wonderful review of my book chapter, Teri dear. How kind of you to stop by. Love and blessings always,
Sal XOs

Comment from Jay Squires

Exceptional

So ... Fee has lustful thoughts for Sally. That's an interesting twist. As long as he stays in jail, she shouldn't have anything to worry about. But why do I think that his jail time isn't a sure thing? I'm happy to have a 6 star to award this. They're usually long gone by now.

 Comment Written 26-Jul-2023

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reply by the author on 29-Jul-2023

Dear Jay, thank you for the lovely review and generous six star rating. As always, I'm so honored and blessed. Thanks for staying with me.
Sending you my very best,
Sal XOs

Comment from Cindy Warren

Excellent

I knew Elling was going to make some kind of attempt. That lawyer seemed pretty pathetic. Even if he can be bribed, I don't know what he can do. But of course he has to try.

 Comment Written 26-Jul-2023

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reply by the author on 29-Jul-2023

Thank you for the wonderful review of my book chapter. So glad you're staying times. Sending you my best today as always,
Sal XOs

Comment from lyenochka

Excellent

Oh-oh. What could that evil mind be thinking? Fee could never lure anyone, especially the smart and happily-married Detective Law! The signs of your happy marriage is echoed in all the happy couples that find each other in your book!

 Comment Written 25-Jul-2023

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reply by the author on 29-Jul-2023

Thank you for the wonderful review of my book chapter. It was a difficult week with Jan's passing, I know. Thank you for making the time. Sending you my best today as always,.Sal XOs

Comment from Ulla

Exceptional

Woah, Sally, that's quite an ending. What a great new chapter to your wonderful story.
I'm quite sure that unbelief is okay, but I still think it should not disbelief. A big hug. Ulla:)))

 Comment Written 25-Jul-2023

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reply by the author on 29-Jul-2023

Dear Ulla, thank you for the lovely review and generous six star rating. As always, I'm so honored and blessed. Thanks for staying with me.
Sending you my very best,
Sal XOs

Comment from Wendy G

Excellent

Fee is evil personified. What on earth does he have in mind to do against Sally? He has people everywhere who will do his bidding although they are being rounded up. Well written. The intrigue continues.
Wendy

 Comment Written 25-Jul-2023

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reply by the author on 25-Jul-2023

Thank you for the excellent review and insightful comments. Both are so appreciated. Blessings to you all,
Sal XOs