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Comment from JT traveller
A well woven poem. Composed so eloquently that it told a complete story. Not just of despair but of hope and survival.
Well done and thank you for sharing, Jacqueline
reply by the author on 18-Jul-2023
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A well woven poem. Composed so eloquently that it told a complete story. Not just of despair but of hope and survival.
Well done and thank you for sharing, Jacqueline
Comment Written 18-Jul-2023
reply by the author on 18-Jul-2023
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Thank you so much for your encouragement and stars.
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My pleasure.
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
A very unusual write Michelle as you liken ash to snow flakes and from sorrow we eventually heal, but always look back in anger at the losses, a poignant and talented write, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 18-Jul-2023
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A very unusual write Michelle as you liken ash to snow flakes and from sorrow we eventually heal, but always look back in anger at the losses, a poignant and talented write, love Dolly x
Comment Written 18-Jul-2023
reply by the author on 18-Jul-2023
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Thank you Dolly. I am still practicing the sonnet from what you've shown me.you have become my sonnet mentor.