autumn
somewhere in New England2 total reviews
Comment from Janilou
I continue to live in awe of you poets who can make such beautiful words come together into a unique poetry form. Lovely and interesting to read.
The artwork is quite the complimentary touch to your word painting.
All the best,
Jan
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I continue to live in awe of you poets who can make such beautiful words come together into a unique poetry form. Lovely and interesting to read.
The artwork is quite the complimentary touch to your word painting.
All the best,
Jan
Comment Written 18-Jul-2023
Comment from Debbie D'Arcy
Johnny, you've captured the essence of Autumn here so well in your nonet which is well composed although I think your last 4 lines lose a little fluency in your attempt to contain in those limited syllables. But an evocative verse which I enjoyed. Thank you for sharing. You're getting some good practice at these nonets which you obviously like doing. Debbie
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Johnny, you've captured the essence of Autumn here so well in your nonet which is well composed although I think your last 4 lines lose a little fluency in your attempt to contain in those limited syllables. But an evocative verse which I enjoyed. Thank you for sharing. You're getting some good practice at these nonets which you obviously like doing. Debbie
Comment Written 18-Jul-2023