Comment from AP Apgar

Excellent

I like your haiku poem- nice picture presentation- good syllable count and flow- poem appears to tell a story of design- catching some in their web - grandma crocheting a doily - kind of web like- actually used doily's when I was young -lol good job AP

 Comment Written 18-Jul-2023

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reply by the author on 18-Jul-2023

Thank you very much, my friend. May you have a wonderful day.

Gypsy hugs

Comment from barbara.wilkey

Excellent

I like the comparison of the spiders' web and the crocheted a doily. They are similar. My grandma tatted. I wish I would have had her teach me. It's almost a lost art. I enjoyed your perfect package.

 Comment Written 17-Jul-2023

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reply by the author on 17-Jul-2023

Thank you very much for your kind review. I appreciate that you take the time to read and review my poem. I am glad you like it. May you have an awesome day.

Gypsy

Comment from shelley kaye

Exceptional

omg i never thought to compare a spider weaving a web to a women making a doily - very cool image!! love it!
and excellent pics to accompany the smooth flowing haiku.

thank you for sharing
shelley :)

 Comment Written 17-Jul-2023

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reply by the author on 17-Jul-2023

Thank you very much for your kind review. I appreciate your exceptional six stars review my poem. I am glad you like it. May you have an awesome day.

Gypsy

Comment from GWHARGIS

Excellent

Is Grandma like the spider in the sense she is setting up a beautiful trap or is this about the intricate artwork. Bet you weren't expecting that. Lol. I love the comparison of the two. Great way to wake up. Reading beautiful poetry. Gretchen

 Comment Written 17-Jul-2023

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reply by the author on 17-Jul-2023

Thank you very much for your kind review. I appreciate that you take the time to read and review my poem. I am glad you like it. May you have an awesome day.

Gypsy

Comment from Cindy Decker 2

Excellent

Gypsy,
Your poem elicits beautiful images of webs that may look ominous, but are beautified by your words.
Your photos are beauty and effective.
Thank you for helping me understand the haiku form; I had a lot of trouble with it before reading your poems.

 Comment Written 17-Jul-2023

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reply by the author on 17-Jul-2023

Thank you very much for your kind review. I appreciate that you take the time to read and review my poem. I am glad you like it. May you have an awesome day.

Gypsy

Comment from Alexandra Trovato

Exceptional

I've heard of making lemons from lemons but this is doilies from spider webs. lol They do kind of look like each other. Maybe there are clot of artisan spiders out there. Your words are perfect and creatively chosen. The idea is unique also. May new blessings wash over you my Friend! love Alexan x

 Comment Written 16-Jul-2023

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reply by the author on 17-Jul-2023

Thank you very much, Alexan. I appreciate that you took the time to read my poem. Thank you for the exceptional six stars review :)

gypsy hugs

reply by Alexandra Trovato on 17-Jul-2023

I had it, and you deserved it. You're welcome.

Hugs

Alexan

Comment from RodG

Excellent

This photo/haiku combo is perfectly matched. Nothing fascinates me more than watching a spider spin its web, especially if it's a large one that spreads over a considerable distance. And I loved to watch my grandmother crochet a doily with an intricate pattern. Rod

 Comment Written 16-Jul-2023

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reply by the author on 16-Jul-2023

Thank you very much for your excellent review and kind words.

Gypsy hugs

Comment from lyenochka

Excellent

Lol. It really is remarkable how spiders can weave such delicate yet strong webs. I like how you echo the industrious work of the spider with grandma knitting a doily!

 Comment Written 16-Jul-2023

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reply by the author on 16-Jul-2023

Big sister

Thank you very much for your excellent review and kind words.

Love
Marival