That One Day
Indelible3 total reviews
Comment from jim vecchio
I love the way you words flow, no matter what the subject or meaning of your work is. I hope the subject of this poem was one day able to enjoy the love that the writer held for him.
reply by the author on 18-Jul-2023
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I love the way you words flow, no matter what the subject or meaning of your work is. I hope the subject of this poem was one day able to enjoy the love that the writer held for him.
Comment Written 18-Jul-2023
reply by the author on 18-Jul-2023
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Fictitious
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You did a good job and made me believe it!
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:)
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Our imagination is endless
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Keep up your wonderful work!
Comment from JT traveller
Good meter. Interesting and thought provoking poem. I really love how both you and I seem to have developed since joining this site. It takes work and dedication. Well done, Jacqueline
reply by the author on 16-Jul-2023
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Good meter. Interesting and thought provoking poem. I really love how both you and I seem to have developed since joining this site. It takes work and dedication. Well done, Jacqueline
Comment Written 16-Jul-2023
reply by the author on 16-Jul-2023
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It is nice to have a discipline with writing isn't it?
Thank you for this
Judith
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Yes it is. Have a wonderful day. Jacqueline
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
This is a magical write Judith, loved the sentiments, not only inked on the page but indelible upon the heart too, someone you will never forget, a deeply moving albeit short poem, love it, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 16-Jul-2023
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This is a magical write Judith, loved the sentiments, not only inked on the page but indelible upon the heart too, someone you will never forget, a deeply moving albeit short poem, love it, love Dolly x
Comment Written 16-Jul-2023
reply by the author on 16-Jul-2023
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How sweet of you to give me six stars! Thank you Dolly!
Judith
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You deserve them Judith x