Comment from AP Apgar

Excellent

I like your Haiku poem - good picture presentation- good syllable count and connection between lines - bee's holding the weight of the world in a true sense- no pollution detrimental to human existence- good job-AP

 Comment Written 18-Jul-2023

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reply by the author on 18-Jul-2023

Thank you very much, my friend. May you have a wonderful day.

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Comment from kahpot

Excellent

Very well said, yes, bees to carry a lot of weight, supplying pollen all over the countries, an excellent haiku, very well written and presented****kahpot

 Comment Written 17-Jul-2023

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reply by the author on 17-Jul-2023

Thank you very much. I appreciate that you took the time to read and review my poem.

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Comment from w.j.debi

Excellent

They do hold the weight of the world on those latte wings, don't they? Those little bees are so essential to our existence. Wonderful presentation and timely message.

 Comment Written 16-Jul-2023

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reply by the author on 16-Jul-2023

Thank you very much for your excellent review and kind words.

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Comment from barbara.wilkey

Excellent

Those little guys sure do. They are so needed for pollination for so many things. Our crops depend on them. Thank you for sharing this tribute to the bees with us. Great job.

 Comment Written 16-Jul-2023

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reply by the author on 16-Jul-2023

Thank you very much for your excellent review and kind words.

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Comment from Mike Stevens

Excellent

Another fine poem, Gypsy----sadly, bees seem to be disappearing everywhare----are man-made pollutants to blame? Climate change? No matter the reason, scary

 Comment Written 16-Jul-2023

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reply by the author on 16-Jul-2023

Thank you very much for your excellent review and kind words.

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Comment from shelley kaye

Excellent

i love watching bees - it's so interesting...

great buzzzzzzy haiku!
love that second picture!

thank you for sharing
shelley :)

 Comment Written 16-Jul-2023

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reply by the author on 16-Jul-2023

Thank you very much for your excellent review and kind words.

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Comment from Chrissy710

Excellent

Hi Gypsy A nice Haiku and makes one think about the bees
One question
Should your first 'bees be a single 'bee' as your third line says 'its' therefore singular and maybe should be 'their wings'
Hope that makes sense
Cheers Chris

 Comment Written 16-Jul-2023

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reply by the author on 16-Jul-2023

Thank you for catching that mistake.

Thank you very much for your excellent review and kind words.

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Comment from lyenochka

Excellent

I love the double meaning of the "weight of the world". On one hand the little bees are a wonder of physics that it can fly at all with its tiny wings and huge body. But because of its work of pollination, humans are able to survive because their work provides food!

 Comment Written 16-Jul-2023

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reply by the author on 16-Jul-2023

Thank you very much big sister. I hope you had a good weekend. Mine was exhausting but I got to spend time with my son and his wife. That was nice.

Love

Marival

Comment from Jasmine Girl

Excellent

You are so right about these hard working bees. We must protect them at all costs. Now every time, I see a bee, I try to just be friendly, trying not to be afraid. I'll never try to kill them like before.

Well done.

 Comment Written 15-Jul-2023

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reply by the author on 16-Jul-2023

Thank you very much for your excellent review and kind words.

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