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Be Wee With Bea Part 3

Viewing comments for Chapter 26 "A Costume Contest"
Third in a series is quite sad in the beginning.

9 total reviews 
Comment from davisr (Rhonda)
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Hi Liz!

This is the first chapter I've read in those book. Your characters are charming, and serve as great metaphors for real children. They work out fears and disagreements children might encounter in the real world.

An enjoyable read.

Take care,
Rhonda

 Comment Written 21-Jul-2023


reply by the author on 21-Jul-2023
    Thank you for your pioneering review. If you are interested in reading more, feel free to check out my portfolio, but no review is necessary. Just enjoy
reply by davisr (Rhonda) on 21-Jul-2023
    Okay, thank you!
reply by the author on 22-Jul-2023
    ***Hugs***
Comment from Mario PIERRE
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It's been awhile since I read one of your excellent episodes of Bea...
I find this chapter quite captivating and funny. The characters are very well defined as in the previous chapters and the idea hre is really charming ( costume contest)
Very well done!!

 Comment Written 21-Jul-2023


reply by the author on 21-Jul-2023
    Thank you for your delightful review.
Comment from Ulla
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Hi Liz, I will so miss Bes after the next chapter. But as everything in this life it all comes to an end however sad that is. Children will love this book. Ulla xxc

 Comment Written 15-Jul-2023


reply by the author on 15-Jul-2023

    Thank you for your lovely review. I will be sad after I write the last chapter even though it is hopeful. But it is where I am now. I haven't lived a 4th book yet.
reply by Ulla on 15-Jul-2023
    Well, maybe Bea has a fourth book in her? Wouldn't that be something?
reply by the author on 15-Jul-2023
    Because they are autobiographical, I'd have to live out some more adventures first.
    But my next book is my autobiography. I also began that 20 years ago along with Bea 1
reply by Ulla on 15-Jul-2023
    Alright, I understand. I'm looking forward to read your autobiography. Ulla:)))
reply by the author on 15-Jul-2023
    Great...good to know I already have one enthusiast
Comment from aryr
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This was an amazing continuation chapter, Liz. I found it interesting that Bea did not announced her finding to Athena nor Sammy. She chose to be introduced to Sophia, who was dressed like a poodle when in reality she was a poodle. Her prize was no longer a prize. Blessings n Hugs!!!

 Comment Written 15-Jul-2023


reply by the author on 15-Jul-2023

    Thank you for your lovely review. I will be sad after I write the last chapter even though it is hopeful. But it is where I am now. I haven't lived a 4th book yet.
reply by aryr on 15-Jul-2023
    You are so very welcome, Liz. I tried the tree chant and it worked great.
reply by the author on 15-Jul-2023
    Oh good, I was wondering. Is takes me somewhere. I sit outside and chant the Cree word soe Thunderbird, for Frog & the one I gave you. It changes my whole frame of mind & previously grumpy attitude. Thank you for telling me that.
reply by aryr on 15-Jul-2023
    I used my own but I was glad that I did, it made me feel good to the tree.
reply by the author on 15-Jul-2023
    Wonderful
Comment from barbara.wilkey
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I like the idea of "be-good-to-myself" treat. I think it's great. Anyway, thank you for sharing this post with us. I'll be sad after I read the last chapter. I know kids will love this story.


 Comment Written 15-Jul-2023


reply by the author on 15-Jul-2023
    Thank you for your lovely review. I will be sad after I write the last chapter even though it is hopeful. But it is where I am now. I haven't lived the 4th chapter yet.
Comment from Sally Law
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Aw, a sweet be-good-to-muself treat spoiled by the bully! I hate that! Hopefully Bea the wee bear and friends can overcome and reclaim their happiness. Somehow I think they will.

Sending you my best today as always,
Sal XOs

 Comment Written 15-Jul-2023


reply by the author on 15-Jul-2023
    Thank you for your lovely review. I'm glad you enjoyed it.
Comment from Iza Deleanu
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I will love to taste that special dish:) "he best of the prize was the giant, golden-colored jar containing what Bea called her "be-good-to-myself" treat. "

 Comment Written 15-Jul-2023


reply by the author on 15-Jul-2023
    Thank you for your involved review. I'm glad you enjoyed it.
Comment from lyenochka
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Thanks for letting us know that the last chapter is next week! I hope children won't be tempted to do dumpster diving based on reading about how Bea, Sammy, and Athena's going through the dumpster.

I wonder how Bea got her "prize basket" because at first she was scared, then followed the costumed children. But did she go trick-or-treating and got a basket?

I liked how you built the suspense with Athena's and Bea's stories about guns and then the encounter with the kids.

 Comment Written 14-Jul-2023


reply by the author on 14-Jul-2023
    Thank you for your involved review. Bea won the prize for the best costume. That was the reason for the basket. I will make sure this is clearer. This will be being published soon so I want to get it right.
reply by lyenochka on 14-Jul-2023
    Oh, okay! That would be good to know that there was a contest. Thanks for clarifying!
reply by the author on 14-Jul-2023
    "I hope children won't be tempted to do dumpster diving based on reading about how Bea" I have several stories of people getting the food left out on the dumpsters, if you ever want to hear them. Also if kids read the 2nd book where Bea needs to be rescued by Scruffles, they might be discouraged.
Comment from patcelaw
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This is very well written, and I enjoyed listening to it as it read to me allowed. In case you did not know, I am in the hospital. I have a broken femur and a broken pelvis and it's gonna be sometime before I'm going to be able to get back to riding Poudrier stories because I have to do that on the computer and I don't have a computer with me but I can review things so I wish you the very best evening and just keep me in your prayers if you could, please go

 Comment Written 14-Jul-2023


reply by the author on 14-Jul-2023
    Thank you for your involved review. I am sad to hear of your situation. I am sending you healing on all levels, if received.