Taste of My Reality
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2 total reviews
Comment from Iza Deleanu
This poem screams help, and I really get the part with the puppet in the strings, but you are what you think. I hope is just a poem and not your reality.
reply by the author on 18-Jul-2023
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This poem screams help, and I really get the part with the puppet in the strings, but you are what you think. I hope is just a poem and not your reality.
Comment Written 13-Jul-2023
reply by the author on 18-Jul-2023
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The idea behind this book is to make each and every chapter strong, powerful with a message.
Thanks Iza and enjoy tomorrow.
Doctor Ricky
Comment from barbara.wilkey
I figured with you being newly married we'd get all happy rejoicing poems. Nope, we didn't. Thank you for sharing. I enjoyed reading and so no way to improve this poem.
reply by the author on 18-Jul-2023
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I figured with you being newly married we'd get all happy rejoicing poems. Nope, we didn't. Thank you for sharing. I enjoyed reading and so no way to improve this poem.
Comment Written 13-Jul-2023
reply by the author on 18-Jul-2023
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Thanks Barbara and the next poem I will be posting will be entitled, "Up and Down"
Doctor Ricky
