Comment from Katherine M. (k-11)

Excellent

I am glad Ben has turned out to have the ability to cast miracles. If anyone deserves sainthood status he does. Look how he even proects his young helper Tony from the seamier side of life. Also, he isn't beyond a bit of mischief. Nice writing. kay

 Comment Written 14-Jul-2023

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reply by the author on 14-Jul-2023

Thank you. I'm trying to thread a moving needle with Ben a totally committed man of God, yet every bit human.
Thank you for your very nice review.

Comment from lyenochka

Excellent

Good for Ben! Not sure what happened to the policeman but I assume it had to be some divine intervention. I was surprised that Ben could get into a place a second time after that one girl do disappeared with him. I thought it was realistic that not all the girls wanted to escape.

 Comment Written 13-Jul-2023

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reply by the author on 13-Jul-2023

Thank you. The cop was afflicted with ED - better than taking a disease home (if he was married) And this was pre-penicillin.

reply by lyenochka on 13-Jul-2023

Ah. Thanks for explaining.

Comment from Ulla

Excellent

I haven't read much of this story,, so I'm still struggling catching up. Diamond Jim appears to be a shady figure, and I just wonder what Ben is going to do about it all. Ulla:)))

 Comment Written 13-Jul-2023

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reply by the author on 13-Jul-2023

Thank you. The earlier section was Ben in the Colorado gold country.

Comment from Jim Wile

Excellent

Okay, so Diamond Jim is still a degenerate after all and showing his true colors now. He is certainly starting to feel a hit to his income with so many of his girls leaving him. Looks like we're heading for a nice showdown. I wonder if Angelo will be involved in this too? Good chapter, Wayne.

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"Some of the ones that have been there a while..." (should be who instead of that.)

 Comment Written 13-Jul-2023

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reply by the author on 13-Jul-2023

Thank you, and for the catch.

Comment from eliz100

Excellent

I enjoy reading the chapters of your book. After each one, I look forward to the next. I did not quite get what happens to the cop. I do not see any room for improvement. Have a blessed day.

 Comment Written 13-Jul-2023

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reply by the author on 13-Jul-2023

Thank you for your review.
The cop developed ED.

Comment from Carol Hillebrenner

Excellent

Ben's new crusade is certainly a worthy one. It is remarkable that God has given him the power to lead the women, and no one could see them as long as they held hands with him. The punishment he brought down on the police officer was very sad if he had a wife.

 Comment Written 13-Jul-2023

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reply by the author on 13-Jul-2023

Thank you for your review.
Sad, but maybe not as sad as bringing home a disease before penicillin was developed.

Comment from nancy_e_davis

Excellent

Well done, Wayne. Another interesting chapter
and Ben is rescuing women who have been forced
into working as prostitutes in Diamond Jim's
bordello's. So far, so good. Nancy:)

 Comment Written 13-Jul-2023

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reply by the author on 13-Jul-2023

Thank you for your very kind review.

Comment from Ben Colder

Excellent

I can see most of this unfolding as a story that count be true. Remind me of Dave Wilkerson and the Cross and switchblade. A minister who dealt with such. Thanks for sharing. I enjoyed the story.

 Comment Written 13-Jul-2023

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reply by the author on 13-Jul-2023

Thank you. That was exactly who I had in mind for that scene.

reply by Ben Colder on 13-Jul-2023

Well, done, Bro.

reply by the author on 13-Jul-2023

Am I muted, or blocked from your posts?
If one of my reviews was less than kind, I apologize - it was probably before I learned how to do it.

reply by Ben Colder on 13-Jul-2023

Not sure. I will check it out.

Comment from BethShelby

Excellent

It is good Ben fasts and prays before undertaking anything so dangerous as recueing the women for Diamon Jim Bordellos. It doen't pay to be thinking about visiting a bordello when Jim is praying if a man wants to keep his manhood.

 Comment Written 13-Jul-2023

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reply by the author on 13-Jul-2023

Hah! Yes, and thank you for your very nice review.

Comment from JSD

Excellent

Long but compelling narrative still. The characters and the things you put them through are such fun to read. I always look forward to the next instalment and you don't disappoint.

John

 Comment Written 13-Jul-2023

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reply by the author on 13-Jul-2023

How very kind of you. Thank you.