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2023 Gypsy's Haiku

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9 total reviews 
Comment from Verna Cole Mitchell
Exceptional
This work has reached the exceptional level

This is an extra special haiku. I love the imagery, the poetic language, even the accompanying photograph. Kudos! I always enjoy your quote by Novalis. It's true.

 Comment Written 14-Jul-2023


reply by the author on 14-Jul-2023
    Thank you very much for your exceptional six stars review and kind words.

    Gypsy hugs
Comment from kahpot
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Your words always put me in two minds, (and I like it) this poem I know is about the flower, though I was first imaging waking up beside my loved one, (sorry I know I have a lot to lean) an excellent haiku, very well presented****kahpot

 Comment Written 13-Jul-2023


reply by the author on 14-Jul-2023
    Thank you very much for your excellent review and kind words.

    Gypsy hugs
Comment from aryr
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What a fantastic haiku, Gypsy. The dual pictures were self explanatory. Your words were wonderful, the captured the essence of the morning glory. Blessed Be n Hugs!!!

 Comment Written 13-Jul-2023


reply by the author on 13-Jul-2023
    Thank you, Aryr. You are always so kind and supportive, I appreciate it. Blessed be.

    Gypsy hugs
reply by aryr on 13-Jul-2023
    You are so very welcome, Gypsy.
Comment from shelley kaye
Exceptional
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this was really cool - nice take on the sunrise, the morning-glory flower and the morning dew!! you got it all in one little haiku!

nicely done with great imagery!
thank you for sharing
shelley :)




 Comment Written 13-Jul-2023


reply by the author on 13-Jul-2023
    Thank you very much for your exceptional six stars review and kind feedback.

    Gypsy hugs
Comment from AP Apgar
Excellent
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I like your Haiku poem- nice picture presentation- good word count and flow- poem has continuity- sun drys tears- shaking off the night- nice- Good Job AP

 Comment Written 12-Jul-2023


reply by the author on 12-Jul-2023
    Thank you very much for your excellent review. :)

    Gypsy hugs
Comment from Alexandra Trovato
Excellent
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Virtual Six Stars!! This poem deserves much praise. The beautiful imagery and descriptive words are supported by your lovely strong photos. I truly want to buy your poetry books. Love Alexan :)

 Comment Written 12-Jul-2023


reply by the author on 12-Jul-2023
    Thank you very much, Alexan. I hope you are having a good day.

    Love
    Marival
reply by Alexandra Trovato on 12-Jul-2023
    You're welcome. :)) Emailing you.
Comment from barbara.wilkey
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For some reason Morning Glories grow wild all around our yard. It doesn't matter what they are all over it, even cactus. I happen to think they're gorgeous so leave them alone. Thank you for sharing this beautiful poem with us.

 Comment Written 12-Jul-2023


reply by the author on 12-Jul-2023
    Thank you very much, Barbara. I appreciate your kind review.

    Gypsy hugs
Comment from lyenochka
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It is aptly called the "morning glory" as the glory of the morning shows when the glory of the beautiful flower on these vines. Beautifully presented poem!

 Comment Written 12-Jul-2023


reply by the author on 12-Jul-2023
    Thank you very much, Big Sister. I appreciate your kind review.

    Love,
    MariVal
Comment from Ulla
Exceptional
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I love it, Marival. What a beautiful haiku about dawn when the sun is rising. You have captured it so very well. The imagery in these few words is spectacular..Un abrazo y besito, Ulla xcx

 Comment Written 12-Jul-2023


reply by the author on 12-Jul-2023
    Thank you very much, Ulla. I am so happy you like it. I really appreciate your exceptional six stars review and kind words.

    Besitos y Abrazos

    MariVal