2023 Gypsy's Haiku
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9 total reviews
Comment from Verna Cole Mitchell
This is an extra special haiku. I love the imagery, the poetic language, even the accompanying photograph. Kudos! I always enjoy your quote by Novalis. It's true.
reply by the author on 14-Jul-2023
This is an extra special haiku. I love the imagery, the poetic language, even the accompanying photograph. Kudos! I always enjoy your quote by Novalis. It's true.
Comment Written 14-Jul-2023
reply by the author on 14-Jul-2023
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Thank you very much for your exceptional six stars review and kind words.
Gypsy hugs
Comment from kahpot
Your words always put me in two minds, (and I like it) this poem I know is about the flower, though I was first imaging waking up beside my loved one, (sorry I know I have a lot to lean) an excellent haiku, very well presented****kahpot
reply by the author on 14-Jul-2023
Your words always put me in two minds, (and I like it) this poem I know is about the flower, though I was first imaging waking up beside my loved one, (sorry I know I have a lot to lean) an excellent haiku, very well presented****kahpot
Comment Written 13-Jul-2023
reply by the author on 14-Jul-2023
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Thank you very much for your excellent review and kind words.
Gypsy hugs
Comment from aryr
What a fantastic haiku, Gypsy. The dual pictures were self explanatory. Your words were wonderful, the captured the essence of the morning glory. Blessed Be n Hugs!!!
reply by the author on 13-Jul-2023
What a fantastic haiku, Gypsy. The dual pictures were self explanatory. Your words were wonderful, the captured the essence of the morning glory. Blessed Be n Hugs!!!
Comment Written 13-Jul-2023
reply by the author on 13-Jul-2023
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Thank you, Aryr. You are always so kind and supportive, I appreciate it. Blessed be.
Gypsy hugs
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You are so very welcome, Gypsy.
Comment from shelley kaye
this was really cool - nice take on the sunrise, the morning-glory flower and the morning dew!! you got it all in one little haiku!
nicely done with great imagery!
thank you for sharing
shelley :)
reply by the author on 13-Jul-2023
this was really cool - nice take on the sunrise, the morning-glory flower and the morning dew!! you got it all in one little haiku!
nicely done with great imagery!
thank you for sharing
shelley :)
Comment Written 13-Jul-2023
reply by the author on 13-Jul-2023
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Thank you very much for your exceptional six stars review and kind feedback.
Gypsy hugs
Comment from AP Apgar
I like your Haiku poem- nice picture presentation- good word count and flow- poem has continuity- sun drys tears- shaking off the night- nice- Good Job AP
reply by the author on 12-Jul-2023
I like your Haiku poem- nice picture presentation- good word count and flow- poem has continuity- sun drys tears- shaking off the night- nice- Good Job AP
Comment Written 12-Jul-2023
reply by the author on 12-Jul-2023
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Thank you very much for your excellent review. :)
Gypsy hugs
Comment from Alexandra Trovato
Virtual Six Stars!! This poem deserves much praise. The beautiful imagery and descriptive words are supported by your lovely strong photos. I truly want to buy your poetry books. Love Alexan :)
reply by the author on 12-Jul-2023
Virtual Six Stars!! This poem deserves much praise. The beautiful imagery and descriptive words are supported by your lovely strong photos. I truly want to buy your poetry books. Love Alexan :)
Comment Written 12-Jul-2023
reply by the author on 12-Jul-2023
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Thank you very much, Alexan. I hope you are having a good day.
Love
Marival
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You're welcome. :)) Emailing you.
Comment from barbara.wilkey
For some reason Morning Glories grow wild all around our yard. It doesn't matter what they are all over it, even cactus. I happen to think they're gorgeous so leave them alone. Thank you for sharing this beautiful poem with us.
reply by the author on 12-Jul-2023
For some reason Morning Glories grow wild all around our yard. It doesn't matter what they are all over it, even cactus. I happen to think they're gorgeous so leave them alone. Thank you for sharing this beautiful poem with us.
Comment Written 12-Jul-2023
reply by the author on 12-Jul-2023
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Thank you very much, Barbara. I appreciate your kind review.
Gypsy hugs
Comment from lyenochka
It is aptly called the "morning glory" as the glory of the morning shows when the glory of the beautiful flower on these vines. Beautifully presented poem!
reply by the author on 12-Jul-2023
It is aptly called the "morning glory" as the glory of the morning shows when the glory of the beautiful flower on these vines. Beautifully presented poem!
Comment Written 12-Jul-2023
reply by the author on 12-Jul-2023
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Thank you very much, Big Sister. I appreciate your kind review.
Love,
MariVal
Comment from Ulla
I love it, Marival. What a beautiful haiku about dawn when the sun is rising. You have captured it so very well. The imagery in these few words is spectacular..Un abrazo y besito, Ulla xcx
reply by the author on 12-Jul-2023
I love it, Marival. What a beautiful haiku about dawn when the sun is rising. You have captured it so very well. The imagery in these few words is spectacular..Un abrazo y besito, Ulla xcx
Comment Written 12-Jul-2023
reply by the author on 12-Jul-2023
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Thank you very much, Ulla. I am so happy you like it. I really appreciate your exceptional six stars review and kind words.
Besitos y Abrazos
MariVal