2023 Gypsy's Tanka
Viewing comments for Chapter 10 "Breezes Caress"-
7 total reviews
Comment from aryr
What a fantastic tanka, Gypsy. The pictures were priceless, they were so special. Your words were also priceless because they were there when it happened. Blessed Be n Hugs!!!
reply by the author on 12-Jul-2023
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What a fantastic tanka, Gypsy. The pictures were priceless, they were so special. Your words were also priceless because they were there when it happened. Blessed Be n Hugs!!!
Comment Written 12-Jul-2023
reply by the author on 12-Jul-2023
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Thank you very much, Aryr. I hope you are having a good day. Blessed be.
Gypsy hugs
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You are so very welcome, Gypsy.
Comment from barbara.wilkey
Touch, smell, and sight are used in the beautiful presentation. Thank you for sharing it with us. The black and white photo is a perfect choice. Once again, you reign as the Queen of Poetry.
reply by the author on 12-Jul-2023
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Touch, smell, and sight are used in the beautiful presentation. Thank you for sharing it with us. The black and white photo is a perfect choice. Once again, you reign as the Queen of Poetry.
Comment Written 12-Jul-2023
reply by the author on 12-Jul-2023
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Thank you very much, I appreciate your kind review. Have a wonderful day.
Gypsy hugs
"Poetry heals the wounds inflicted by reason" -- Novalis
Comment from shelley kaye
love the seabreeze caressing the seashells
totally cool image to bring to mind
a great tanka!
nice word choices and smooth flow
thank you for sharing
shelley :)
reply by the author on 12-Jul-2023
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love the seabreeze caressing the seashells
totally cool image to bring to mind
a great tanka!
nice word choices and smooth flow
thank you for sharing
shelley :)
Comment Written 12-Jul-2023
reply by the author on 12-Jul-2023
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Thank you very much, I appreciate your kind review. Have a wonderful day.
Gypsy hugs
"Poetry heals the wounds inflicted by reason" -- Novalis
Comment from kahpot
What a wonderful presentation, so peaceful and serene, many a person has had an affair or started a relationship on/at the beach, as the beach with all its elements has its own relationship, very well written****kahpot
reply by the author on 12-Jul-2023
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What a wonderful presentation, so peaceful and serene, many a person has had an affair or started a relationship on/at the beach, as the beach with all its elements has its own relationship, very well written****kahpot
Comment Written 12-Jul-2023
reply by the author on 12-Jul-2023
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Thank you very much for your excellent review and kind words.
Gypsy hug
Comment from Alexandra Trovato
Very beautiful presentation; I love the images and colors throughout those and your writing. As always,I learned something from your presentation, too, about Tanka, mangroves, and sea grasses. Love, Alexan :))
reply by the author on 12-Jul-2023
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Very beautiful presentation; I love the images and colors throughout those and your writing. As always,I learned something from your presentation, too, about Tanka, mangroves, and sea grasses. Love, Alexan :))
Comment Written 11-Jul-2023
reply by the author on 12-Jul-2023
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Alexan,
Thank you very much for your exceptional six stars review and kind words.
Love
Marival
Gypsy hug
Comment from Loretta Bigg
That is a very nice metaphor of the beach and the shore. A very nice poem indeed. I like all of it, really. But the last line is the best. Sorry I can't give you a six.
reply by the author on 12-Jul-2023
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That is a very nice metaphor of the beach and the shore. A very nice poem indeed. I like all of it, really. But the last line is the best. Sorry I can't give you a six.
Comment Written 11-Jul-2023
reply by the author on 12-Jul-2023
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Thank you very much for your excellent review and kind words.
Gypsy hug
Comment from lyenochka
You used the senses of feeling (breezes caress) and smell (sea scent) and sight (mangrove and sea grass) all to show us the expressions of love in the different parts of nature at the beach. Nice!
reply by the author on 12-Jul-2023
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You used the senses of feeling (breezes caress) and smell (sea scent) and sight (mangrove and sea grass) all to show us the expressions of love in the different parts of nature at the beach. Nice!
Comment Written 11-Jul-2023
reply by the author on 12-Jul-2023
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Thank you very much big sister.
Love,
Marival