2023 Gypsy's Haiku
Viewing comments for Chapter 10 "* Camping Alone *"x
9 total reviews
Comment from kahpot
There is nothing better or more peaceful than camping out by ourselves, it is an excellent time to regroup and find ourseves again, very well written and presented****kahpot
reply by the author on 14-Jul-2023
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There is nothing better or more peaceful than camping out by ourselves, it is an excellent time to regroup and find ourseves again, very well written and presented****kahpot
Comment Written 13-Jul-2023
reply by the author on 14-Jul-2023
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Thank you very much for your excellent review and kind words.
Gypsy hugs
Comment from Mark D. R.
Nice overall presentation Gypsy!
On your camping situation, many things can happen between the moon and the person(s) below.
Watch out for the hungry bear! LOL
reply by the author on 13-Jul-2023
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Nice overall presentation Gypsy!
On your camping situation, many things can happen between the moon and the person(s) below.
Watch out for the hungry bear! LOL
Comment Written 13-Jul-2023
reply by the author on 13-Jul-2023
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Thank you very much for your kind review and feedback.
Gypsy hugs
Comment from Alexandra Trovato
Out of sixes. :/ Another beautiful haiku. And again a wonderful image to bring your words to life. Do you live with all these views lol if so you are a lucky duck. And an extraordinary poet! Love, Alexan ;))
reply by the author on 12-Jul-2023
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Out of sixes. :/ Another beautiful haiku. And again a wonderful image to bring your words to life. Do you live with all these views lol if so you are a lucky duck. And an extraordinary poet! Love, Alexan ;))
Comment Written 12-Jul-2023
reply by the author on 12-Jul-2023
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Thank you very much, Alexan, I appreciate your kind review. Have a wonderful day.
Love,
MariVal
"Poetry heals the wounds inflicted by reason" -- Novalis
Comment from shelley kaye
should you really go camping alone, though?
sounds dangerous and scary...
but - it makes for a great haiku
so all is good lol
thank you for sharing!
shelley :)
reply by the author on 11-Jul-2023
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should you really go camping alone, though?
sounds dangerous and scary...
but - it makes for a great haiku
so all is good lol
thank you for sharing!
shelley :)
Comment Written 11-Jul-2023
reply by the author on 11-Jul-2023
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I would never go camping alone. It's just for the poem.
Thank you, Shelley, I appreciate your kind review. Have a wonderful day.
Gypsy hugs
Comment from lyenochka
It's nice to commune with Nature when feeling sad or needing to work out something of the heart or mind. The moon is a very good listener. Nicely presented and expressed!
reply by the author on 11-Jul-2023
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It's nice to commune with Nature when feeling sad or needing to work out something of the heart or mind. The moon is a very good listener. Nicely presented and expressed!
Comment Written 11-Jul-2023
reply by the author on 11-Jul-2023
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Thank you, Big sister. How is it going? More family outings or visiting your grandkids?
Love you
MariVal
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We are exploring hiking trails. It's much warmer here than our previous neighborhood.
Comment from aryr
What a fantastic haiku, Gypsy. I really appreciated the picture, you mentioned that all that was between the 'moon and me'. You also mentioned camping by yourself. Blessed Be n Hugs!!!
reply by the author on 10-Jul-2023
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What a fantastic haiku, Gypsy. I really appreciated the picture, you mentioned that all that was between the 'moon and me'. You also mentioned camping by yourself. Blessed Be n Hugs!!!
Comment Written 10-Jul-2023
reply by the author on 10-Jul-2023
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Thank you very much for your excellent review and kind words. Blessed be.
Gypsy hugs
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Most welcome, Gypsy.
Comment from AP Apgar
I like your haiku poem- good picture presentation- beautiful night scene - good syllable count and flow - beauty of the just between the moon and me - nicely done-AP
reply by the author on 10-Jul-2023
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I like your haiku poem- good picture presentation- beautiful night scene - good syllable count and flow - beauty of the just between the moon and me - nicely done-AP
Comment Written 10-Jul-2023
reply by the author on 10-Jul-2023
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Thank you, ap. I appreciate your kind review.
Gypsy hugs
Comment from GWHARGIS
I have never been camping but I used to watch this biker as he road through Texas. He would ride all day then camp at night. He always ended with a sunset or beautiful night sky. I camped vicariously through him. Thank you for sharing. Gretchen
reply by the author on 10-Jul-2023
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I have never been camping but I used to watch this biker as he road through Texas. He would ride all day then camp at night. He always ended with a sunset or beautiful night sky. I camped vicariously through him. Thank you for sharing. Gretchen
Comment Written 10-Jul-2023
reply by the author on 10-Jul-2023
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Thank you very much for your excellent review and kind words.
Gypsy hugs
Comment from Pam (respa)
-I am hitting the jackpot with your poems, Gypsy,
but they are always enjoyable to read.
-Lovely artwork and nice presentation.
-A well written haiku with effective
nature and seasonal imagery with
the night and the moon.
-You create a good word picture
of camping alone, and I like the closing line
making it a personal experience.
reply by the author on 10-Jul-2023
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-I am hitting the jackpot with your poems, Gypsy,
but they are always enjoyable to read.
-Lovely artwork and nice presentation.
-A well written haiku with effective
nature and seasonal imagery with
the night and the moon.
-You create a good word picture
of camping alone, and I like the closing line
making it a personal experience.
Comment Written 10-Jul-2023
reply by the author on 10-Jul-2023
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Thank you very much for your excellent review and kind words.
Gypsy hugs
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You are very welcome.