2023 Gypsy's Haiku
Viewing comments for Chapter 9 "Morning Coffee"x
9 total reviews
Comment from Alexandra Trovato
I had more stars but less time earlier. :))
This presentation is gorgeous and your words are warm and familiar to me because I love coffee and we used to have a back porch. Is that your real view? It's amazing with clouds reflected. Nature is God's canvas. It is so wonderful. Love Alexan :))
reply by the author on 12-Jul-2023
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I had more stars but less time earlier. :))
This presentation is gorgeous and your words are warm and familiar to me because I love coffee and we used to have a back porch. Is that your real view? It's amazing with clouds reflected. Nature is God's canvas. It is so wonderful. Love Alexan :))
Comment Written 12-Jul-2023
reply by the author on 12-Jul-2023
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Thank you very much, Alexan, I appreciate your kind review. Have a wonderful day.
Gypsy hugs
"Poetry heals the wounds inflicted by reason" -- Novalis
Comment from Sugarray77
I like the satori very much and can see the entire event in my mind's eye without the artwork you provided. Such a leisurely and relaxing verse! I enjoyed it, Gypsy. :)
Melissa
reply by the author on 12-Jul-2023
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I like the satori very much and can see the entire event in my mind's eye without the artwork you provided. Such a leisurely and relaxing verse! I enjoyed it, Gypsy. :)
Melissa
Comment Written 11-Jul-2023
reply by the author on 12-Jul-2023
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Thank you very much for your excellent review and kind words.
Gypsy hug
Comment from Mike Stevens
Another fine poem, Gypsy----and you said it all, there's nothing quite as tasty as morning coffee. However, afternoon coffee, evening coffee, after dinner coffee, late night coffee, pre-dawn coffee,and sunrise coffee are all a close second!
reply by the author on 12-Jul-2023
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Another fine poem, Gypsy----and you said it all, there's nothing quite as tasty as morning coffee. However, afternoon coffee, evening coffee, after dinner coffee, late night coffee, pre-dawn coffee,and sunrise coffee are all a close second!
Comment Written 11-Jul-2023
reply by the author on 12-Jul-2023
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Thank you very much for your excellent review and kind words.
Gypsy hug
Comment from shelley kaye
lake full of clouds is a great satori!
kinda like the saying head is in the clouds lol
very peaceful haiku!
thank you for sharing
shelley :)
reply by the author on 11-Jul-2023
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lake full of clouds is a great satori!
kinda like the saying head is in the clouds lol
very peaceful haiku!
thank you for sharing
shelley :)
Comment Written 11-Jul-2023
reply by the author on 11-Jul-2023
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Thank you, Shelley, I appreciate your kind review.
Gypsy hugs
Comment from lyenochka
The lake reflects the clouds of the lake in just the same way there are reflections of the thought clouds in the narrator's coffee. Hope you get some quiet times to reflect and rest your mind.
reply by the author on 11-Jul-2023
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The lake reflects the clouds of the lake in just the same way there are reflections of the thought clouds in the narrator's coffee. Hope you get some quiet times to reflect and rest your mind.
Comment Written 11-Jul-2023
reply by the author on 11-Jul-2023
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I hope so too. Atticus has been pretty good today and I had time to clean and get ready for tomorrow's club event.
Thank you, Big Sister, I appreciate your kind review. Have a wonderful day.
Love,
MariVal
Comment from aryr
What a great haiku, Gypsy. What an awesome picture of the sunrise peeking over the mountains and a coffee. Your words were majik because they showed a lake full of clouds. Very well done and greatly enjoyed. Blessed Be n Hugs!!!
reply by the author on 10-Jul-2023
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What a great haiku, Gypsy. What an awesome picture of the sunrise peeking over the mountains and a coffee. Your words were majik because they showed a lake full of clouds. Very well done and greatly enjoyed. Blessed Be n Hugs!!!
Comment Written 10-Jul-2023
reply by the author on 10-Jul-2023
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Thank you very much for your excellent review and kind words. Blessed be.
Gypsy hugs
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You are so very welcome, Gypsy.
Comment from AP Apgar
I like your haiku poem - good picture presentation and flow - good syllable count - picture supports the poem perfectly- poem paints a clear picture in support of the theme without excessive metaphors- nice - nicely done! AP
reply by the author on 10-Jul-2023
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I like your haiku poem - good picture presentation and flow - good syllable count - picture supports the poem perfectly- poem paints a clear picture in support of the theme without excessive metaphors- nice - nicely done! AP
Comment Written 10-Jul-2023
reply by the author on 10-Jul-2023
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Thank you, ap. I appreciate your kind review.
Gypsy hugs
Comment from GWHARGIS
Beautiful imagery. I liked the vision you presented of the clouds reflection in the calm waters of the lake. You told of a time and place where the day is young and full of possibilities. Great job on this. Gretchen
reply by the author on 10-Jul-2023
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Beautiful imagery. I liked the vision you presented of the clouds reflection in the calm waters of the lake. You told of a time and place where the day is young and full of possibilities. Great job on this. Gretchen
Comment Written 10-Jul-2023
reply by the author on 10-Jul-2023
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Thank you very much for your excellent review and kind words.
Gypsy hugs
Comment from Pam (respa)
-Lovely artwork and nice presentation, Gypsy.
-Effective nature and seasonal imagery
create a peaceful mood and setting.
-The view is wonderful doubly so
because the clouds are reflected in the lake.
-A well written haiku.
reply by the author on 10-Jul-2023
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-Lovely artwork and nice presentation, Gypsy.
-Effective nature and seasonal imagery
create a peaceful mood and setting.
-The view is wonderful doubly so
because the clouds are reflected in the lake.
-A well written haiku.
Comment Written 10-Jul-2023
reply by the author on 10-Jul-2023
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Thank you very much for your excellent review and kind words.
Gypsy hugs
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You are welcome.