Short Stories
Viewing comments for Chapter 6 "Planteration"A collection of short stories
3 total reviews
Comment from Andrea Kepple
The twist at the end I didn't see coming. I like how you lead the reader to think the story is headed in one direction and then it ends in a different direction.
reply by the author on 09-Jul-2023
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The twist at the end I didn't see coming. I like how you lead the reader to think the story is headed in one direction and then it ends in a different direction.
Comment Written 09-Jul-2023
reply by the author on 09-Jul-2023
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Thank you. I'm glad it was a surprise.
Comment from JT traveller
Nice write, great ending.
I have a lot of experience in dealing with organophosphate poisonings, unfortunately. A teaspoon will not kill someone and not that quickly. In saying that, most people would not know this and it makes for an exciting read with a great twist at the end. JT
reply by the author on 09-Jul-2023
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Nice write, great ending.
I have a lot of experience in dealing with organophosphate poisonings, unfortunately. A teaspoon will not kill someone and not that quickly. In saying that, most people would not know this and it makes for an exciting read with a great twist at the end. JT
Comment Written 09-Jul-2023
reply by the author on 09-Jul-2023
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I was hoping most won't catch on . I heard that systemic reactions can kill eventually. Don't tell anyone. Hahaha
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Organophosphate poisoning does kill if not attended to in a timely fashion. I recently worked in Dharan, the East Terai of Nepal. I am an emergency physician and international disaster medicine doc. This was a very common form of suicide in young women there.
Your secret is safe with me. I did enjoy your story. I know lots of ways to kill without leaving a trace. Let me know if you're ever in need of that knowledge. I'm just joking. This Aussie doctor's sense of humour gets me through a lot of rough moments.
Great story and the twist at the end was perfect. Jacqueline
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I love that I can get all kinds of advice ....even how to murder without getting caught! Hahahah.
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Haha. I am in a good place right now. I have just been offered 2 contracts to publish my debut novel. I am now working on my second, a thriller set in the Australian outback about a female serial killer who leaves no trace when she kills her victims. Good to know toxicology. It's my favourite topic. Have a great day. Jacqueline
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That is fantastic. I love serial killer stories. Why do we, in the health professions have a fascination for that? I like the psychology of it. I'm not a poison expert. Mine is psychiatry.
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Emergency medicine and international disaster medicine. Trained also in toxicology and tropical medicine. Saw a lot of OP poisoning in Dharan, Nepal when I went to set up a post grad diploma in EM. Psychiatry. Cool. My SIL and BIL are both psychiatrists in London. Ah, the morbid fascinations we love!
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Another reply, sorry. After gaining my fellowship I decided to work as a psych registrar for 6/12. I really wanted to see what it was all.about. You must have so much material. Have you or are you writing a book?
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I am writing a book which uses the main theme of reconciliation among 6 characters and I am using personality types to flesh out the characters. The backstories are also from real life situations.
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
Oh dear, this plan did not work out so well and those eating contests are awful, why do they do it! This is a fun post and I enjoyed the journey here, good luck with the contest, love Dolly x x x
reply by the author on 09-Jul-2023
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Oh dear, this plan did not work out so well and those eating contests are awful, why do they do it! This is a fun post and I enjoyed the journey here, good luck with the contest, love Dolly x x x
Comment Written 09-Jul-2023
reply by the author on 09-Jul-2023
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Thanks. I wanted to avoid gory revenge. Haha