Neighborly Visits
What happens when the visits get out of hand3 total reviews
Comment from Andrea Kepple
You bring Francine into focus through the choices of what to share in the story. You provided an interesting twist at the end of the story.
reply by the author on 09-Jul-2023
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You bring Francine into focus through the choices of what to share in the story. You provided an interesting twist at the end of the story.
Comment Written 09-Jul-2023
reply by the author on 09-Jul-2023
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Thank you. I am glad that you found it interesting and I thank you for reading and reviewing.
Comment from JSD
Ooh. Exciting and intriguing stuff. The relationships and characters are quickly established in this revenge narrative and your ending was satisfying. Well done and good luck.
reply by the author on 09-Jul-2023
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Ooh. Exciting and intriguing stuff. The relationships and characters are quickly established in this revenge narrative and your ending was satisfying. Well done and good luck.
Comment Written 09-Jul-2023
reply by the author on 09-Jul-2023
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Thank you very much! Glad you enjoyed the story.
Comment from JT traveller
I love how you left the reader's hanging at the end. A well spun tale, beware of other women trying to steal your man, also be wary of a man with a roaming eye.
Great message, delivered succinctly. Well done. Jacqueline
reply by the author on 09-Jul-2023
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I love how you left the reader's hanging at the end. A well spun tale, beware of other women trying to steal your man, also be wary of a man with a roaming eye.
Great message, delivered succinctly. Well done. Jacqueline
Comment Written 09-Jul-2023
reply by the author on 09-Jul-2023
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Thank you, Jacqueline. I appreciate you reviewing and your kind words.