2023 Gypsy's Tanka
Viewing comments for Chapter 9 "The Wishful Moon"-
8 total reviews
Comment from aryr
What a great tanka, Gypsy. The dual pictures were phenomenal, the young lady and the flowers. I appreciated your words because they told the truth. Not every one can be a descriptive as you can. You described the effects to the points of fire between your legs. Blessed Be n Hugs!!!
reply by the author on 09-Jul-2023
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What a great tanka, Gypsy. The dual pictures were phenomenal, the young lady and the flowers. I appreciated your words because they told the truth. Not every one can be a descriptive as you can. You described the effects to the points of fire between your legs. Blessed Be n Hugs!!!
Comment Written 09-Jul-2023
reply by the author on 09-Jul-2023
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Thank you very much for your excellent review and kind words. Blessed be.
Gypsy hugs
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Most welcome, Gypsy.
Comment from JSD
Goodness! Raunchy stuff from a rather saucy Gypsy. I do envy the way you write these. Painting scenes with such gentle brush-strokes. All power to you. John
reply by the author on 09-Jul-2023
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Goodness! Raunchy stuff from a rather saucy Gypsy. I do envy the way you write these. Painting scenes with such gentle brush-strokes. All power to you. John
Comment Written 09-Jul-2023
reply by the author on 09-Jul-2023
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Oh no.... not raunchy stuff... however, I can be saucy at times. :)
Thank you very much. John, I appreciate your detailed review and feedback.
Gypsy hugs
Comment from lyenochka
I suppose if the beloved is being dreamed of, it is most likely that the thoughts would continue even when awoken by the moonlight. The sensations could continue.
reply by the author on 09-Jul-2023
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I suppose if the beloved is being dreamed of, it is most likely that the thoughts would continue even when awoken by the moonlight. The sensations could continue.
Comment Written 09-Jul-2023
reply by the author on 09-Jul-2023
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Yes. Thank you big sister. I appreciate you.
Love
Marival
Comment from Mike Stevens
Another fine poem, Gypsy, and time to cool off, talk about a Burning Bed. So hot there better be a fire extinguisher mounted on the wall--should I say 'mounted"?
reply by the author on 08-Jul-2023
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Another fine poem, Gypsy, and time to cool off, talk about a Burning Bed. So hot there better be a fire extinguisher mounted on the wall--should I say 'mounted"?
Comment Written 08-Jul-2023
reply by the author on 08-Jul-2023
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Thank you very much for your excellent review and kind feedback.
Gypsy hugs
Comment from Jumbo J
Hi Reina Lobo Gitana,
firstly, may I say...
To compose something within such a topic so tastefully is no easy feat.
Your first line actually takes one into the dreaming of the rest of this cleverly constructed Tanka poem. It creates a visual connection in the wishful moon... the unsettled sleep of desire, the double meanings, and the sensation of pure passion.
Yes, beautiful in every way!
With our thoughts we create...
a veil between reality.
Warmest regards,
James.
reply by the author on 08-Jul-2023
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Hi Reina Lobo Gitana,
firstly, may I say...
To compose something within such a topic so tastefully is no easy feat.
Your first line actually takes one into the dreaming of the rest of this cleverly constructed Tanka poem. It creates a visual connection in the wishful moon... the unsettled sleep of desire, the double meanings, and the sensation of pure passion.
Yes, beautiful in every way!
With our thoughts we create...
a veil between reality.
Warmest regards,
James.
Comment Written 08-Jul-2023
reply by the author on 08-Jul-2023
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Thank you, James. I am happy you like this one, it's one of my favorites, is it lame to like your own poems? hahaha
I appreciate the exceptional six stars review and kind words!
besitos y abrazos mi mejor amigo
MariVal
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No, it's never lame to appreciate what you can do and how you can express yourself... once again, certain topics have to be handled in a very special way... it's so easy to tip the scales. You my friend, are a master at it.
Las amigas son un regalo, vivo en esa gratitud dulce dama.
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A reviewer called my poem raunchy and me a saucy Gypsy.... oh well.
Besitos y abrazos
Comment from shelley kaye
dual meaning on "he comes"? LOL!
very sensual and loving tanka
excellent last line with the 'fire aflame'
nicely done - thank you for sharing
shelley :)
reply by the author on 08-Jul-2023
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dual meaning on "he comes"? LOL!
very sensual and loving tanka
excellent last line with the 'fire aflame'
nicely done - thank you for sharing
shelley :)
Comment Written 08-Jul-2023
reply by the author on 08-Jul-2023
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Thank you very much for your excellent review and funny feedback. LoL
Gypsy hugs
Comment from Debbie D'Arcy
This definitely fits the brief when it comes to stirring and love. Your verse beautifully transitions from dream fantasy to sensual and palpable personification. Nicely done! take care Debbie
reply by the author on 08-Jul-2023
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This definitely fits the brief when it comes to stirring and love. Your verse beautifully transitions from dream fantasy to sensual and palpable personification. Nicely done! take care Debbie
Comment Written 08-Jul-2023
reply by the author on 08-Jul-2023
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Thank you very much for your excellent review and kind feedback.
Gypsy hugs
Comment from GWHARGIS
This was quite vivid and full of unabashed passion. The line about the moon sneaking in made me think about a voyeur. Watching through the window. Really steamy and wistful. Gretchen
reply by the author on 08-Jul-2023
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This was quite vivid and full of unabashed passion. The line about the moon sneaking in made me think about a voyeur. Watching through the window. Really steamy and wistful. Gretchen
Comment Written 08-Jul-2023
reply by the author on 08-Jul-2023
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Thank you very much for your excellent review and kind feedback.
Gypsy hugs