Comment from
Julie G1
Well done. This poem expresses some deep emotions, a reaction of a human, in an evocative choice of language and imagery. The poet conveys a succinct and apt message. I hope you keep on composing such verse.
Comment Written 21-Jul-2023
reply by the author on 23-Jul-2023
Comment from
Dolly'sPoems
Is this old age creeping in and stopping you from doing all the things you used to do? With each decade we change and acceptance is the only way to cope, a poignant write, love Dolly x
Comment Written 20-Jul-2023
reply by the author on 21-Jul-2023