Comment from barbara.wilkey

Excellent

Thank you for sharing. I enjoyed reading. I'm sorry I missed you getting married. You went from homeless to married. WOW!! Congratulations!

Stumpy hotels and.
Taxed and text some more. (not sure why the period is after 'and')

No comfort and the TV is is horrid. (one 'is' is enough)

 Comment Written 08-Jul-2023

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reply by the author on 09-Jul-2023

Thanks again Barbara and have a blessed Sunday.
Doctor Ricky

Comment from Dolly'sPoems

Excellent

Some people are nomads because it is in their blood, they can't stay in one place for long. We have gypsies here in England and they are often despised by others because they have a lifestyle without paying taxes or taking responsibility, the are also thieves. We had them in the park last year and they targeted old people shopping in charity shops and stole their purses. They were eventually moved on, they have a bad reputation. I know not all nomads are like this. A poignant write Ricky, love Dolly x x x

 Comment Written 08-Jul-2023

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reply by the author on 09-Jul-2023

Thank you Dolly and of course my new wife and I are not nomads.
She's from South Carolina and I'm from New Jersey so it's kind of a meeting of mind.
My wife lost her home in North Myrtle Beach SC.
During hurricane Sandy.
And then lost her second home in Florida during hurricane Ian.
Doctor Ricky

reply by Dolly'sPoems on 09-Jul-2023

How tragic that is Ricky x

Comment from JSD

Excellent

Interesting and intriguing writing again. Well done. I love the repetitive rhyme and the internal rhyme too; most satisfying. And a lovely descriptive tale. John

 Comment Written 08-Jul-2023

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reply by the author on 09-Jul-2023

Always a pleasure to see you review my work John and have a blessed rest of your Sunday.
Doctor Ricky