Comment from Loretta Bigg

Excellent

This is nice, a kind of elegy to family and togetherness. Unless it is meant as an image or something I am pretty positive you misspelled the last word. But the rest is great.

 Comment Written 06-Jul-2023

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reply by the author on 21-Jul-2023

Hi, it's part of another poem and thanks for pointing the mistake out.

Norm

Comment from kahpot

Excellent

Excellent, (please check your last word) "someonr" may need fixing, we must have love for ourselves before we can love another, a wonderful read, very well done****kahpot

 Comment Written 06-Jul-2023

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reply by the author on 21-Jul-2023

Thanks for the revue. This poem will be joined by five poems to make one.

Norm