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Thoughts from the dark side

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Comment from JSD
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An interesting little piece, but I'm a bit confused about one life having a capital letter and the other not. Secondly, one 'life' has a missing 'i'. Or is this intentional?

 Comment Written 06-Jul-2023


reply by the author on 06-Jul-2023
    I owe you. I wrote this after some libations. Life
reply by JSD on 06-Jul-2023
    Lol
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
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A cycle we are all in and your very simple words here show us that death is inevitable from the moment we are born, and there is no definitive answer, we just have to get on with it, love Dolly x

 Comment Written 06-Jul-2023


reply by the author on 06-Jul-2023
    Dolly, life may die but the soul goes on. Thought is forever.