2023 Gypsy's Haiku
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8 total reviews
Comment from Mary Vigasin
This is stunning and beautiful in words and presentation. The "warmhearted farewell." is creative and brilliant.
Good luck in the contest and thank you for the warm thoughts and image.'
Best wishes,
Mary
reply by the author on 06-Jul-2023
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This is stunning and beautiful in words and presentation. The "warmhearted farewell." is creative and brilliant.
Good luck in the contest and thank you for the warm thoughts and image.'
Best wishes,
Mary
Comment Written 06-Jul-2023
reply by the author on 06-Jul-2023
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Thank you very much for your excellent review and kind words
Gypsy hugs
Comment from shelley kaye
is it going to double dip? LOL!
a great lune
personally i think the first line works better as "sunset dips" - but that could be just me lol
cool write, pics, and colours...
thank you for sharing
shelley :)
reply by the author on 06-Jul-2023
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is it going to double dip? LOL!
a great lune
personally i think the first line works better as "sunset dips" - but that could be just me lol
cool write, pics, and colours...
thank you for sharing
shelley :)
Comment Written 06-Jul-2023
reply by the author on 06-Jul-2023
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Thank you very much. Shelley.
Gypsy
Comment from kahpot
Beautiful, "dips" this word gave me so much imagery, as I related it to dancing, an excellent lune poem, very well written and presented, best wishes for your contest****kahpot
reply by the author on 06-Jul-2023
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Beautiful, "dips" this word gave me so much imagery, as I related it to dancing, an excellent lune poem, very well written and presented, best wishes for your contest****kahpot
Comment Written 05-Jul-2023
reply by the author on 06-Jul-2023
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Thank you so much for the exceptional five stars review and kind words.
Gypsy hugs
Comment from aryr
Good luck wishes regarding the contest entry, Gypsy. This was a fantastic lune. The dual pictures of the mountain and dragon flies were wonderful. Your words were great because they showed a final farewell. Very well done and greatly enjoyed. Blessed Be n Hugs!!!
reply by the author on 05-Jul-2023
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Good luck wishes regarding the contest entry, Gypsy. This was a fantastic lune. The dual pictures of the mountain and dragon flies were wonderful. Your words were great because they showed a final farewell. Very well done and greatly enjoyed. Blessed Be n Hugs!!!
Comment Written 05-Jul-2023
reply by the author on 05-Jul-2023
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Thank you very much for your time, kind review, and helpfull feedback.
Gypsy hugs
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Most welcome, Gypsy.
Comment from GWHARGIS
Not only is this poem written beautifully, it also visually stunning. The use of words like dipping and warmth give it a cozy and relaxed feel. Thank-you for sharing this. Gretchen
reply by the author on 06-Jul-2023
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Not only is this poem written beautifully, it also visually stunning. The use of words like dipping and warmth give it a cozy and relaxed feel. Thank-you for sharing this. Gretchen
Comment Written 05-Jul-2023
reply by the author on 06-Jul-2023
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Thank you so much for the exceptional five stars review and kind words.
Gypsy hugs
Comment from JSD
Another demonstration of your beautiful language and imagery. And you always make the colours so sympathetic. Can't do that. As usual you build to a fine climax; it is 'warm-hearted' that makes this. Well done and good luck.
reply by the author on 06-Jul-2023
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Another demonstration of your beautiful language and imagery. And you always make the colours so sympathetic. Can't do that. As usual you build to a fine climax; it is 'warm-hearted' that makes this. Well done and good luck.
Comment Written 05-Jul-2023
reply by the author on 06-Jul-2023
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Thank you so much for the exceptional five stars review and kind words.
Gypsy hugs
Comment from lyenochka
So cool! Love that picture and yes, it does look like the sun is taking a dip into the mountain ridge! Your final line combines the warmth of the sunset colors and the coolness of the farewell. Lovely!
reply by the author on 06-Jul-2023
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So cool! Love that picture and yes, it does look like the sun is taking a dip into the mountain ridge! Your final line combines the warmth of the sunset colors and the coolness of the farewell. Lovely!
Comment Written 05-Jul-2023
reply by the author on 06-Jul-2023
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Thank you very much big sister!
Love,
Marival
Comment from barbara.wilkey
Thank you for sharing this contes entry with us. It's beautiful as is the artwork you chose to go with us. I liked the idea of the sunset 'dipping' into the mountain range. Great visual. Good luck with the contest. I believe you won't need it.
reply by the author on 06-Jul-2023
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Thank you for sharing this contes entry with us. It's beautiful as is the artwork you chose to go with us. I liked the idea of the sunset 'dipping' into the mountain range. Great visual. Good luck with the contest. I believe you won't need it.
Comment Written 05-Jul-2023
reply by the author on 06-Jul-2023
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Thank you so much for the four stars review and kind words.
Gypsy hugs