2023 Gypsy's Tanka
Viewing comments for Chapter 5 "Mending A Broken Soul"-
9 total reviews
Comment from barbara.wilkey
God can heal us from a broken heart and much more. We just need to allow Him to do it. I do believe He'd probably use the threads of cerulean moon to do it. I can't imagine any different. Once again, your talent shines through.
reply by the author on 06-Jul-2023
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God can heal us from a broken heart and much more. We just need to allow Him to do it. I do believe He'd probably use the threads of cerulean moon to do it. I can't imagine any different. Once again, your talent shines through.
Comment Written 05-Jul-2023
reply by the author on 06-Jul-2023
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Thank you so much for the exceptional five stars review and kind words.
Gypsy hugs
Comment from aryr
This was a great tanka, Gypsy. I really liked the dual pictures of the eye and the method of the moon. I appreciated how you offered to pick up the pieces of the broken heart. Blessed Be n Hugs!!!
reply by the author on 06-Jul-2023
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This was a great tanka, Gypsy. I really liked the dual pictures of the eye and the method of the moon. I appreciated how you offered to pick up the pieces of the broken heart. Blessed Be n Hugs!!!
Comment Written 05-Jul-2023
reply by the author on 06-Jul-2023
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Thank you so much for the exceptional five stars review and kind words. Blessed be.
Gypsy hugs
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Most welcome, Gypsy.
Comment from AP Apgar
I like your tanks poem - cool picture presentation- love in his eyes broken- broken heart and soul- put back together with threads of cerulean moon- nice - good notes explaining- think your last five words have 7 syllables? Good job- AP
reply by the author on 06-Jul-2023
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I like your tanks poem - cool picture presentation- love in his eyes broken- broken heart and soul- put back together with threads of cerulean moon- nice - good notes explaining- think your last five words have 7 syllables? Good job- AP
Comment Written 05-Jul-2023
reply by the author on 06-Jul-2023
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Thank you so much for the exceptional five stars review and kind words.
Gypsy hugs
Comment from Yardier
It is difficult to speak of that which you are truly blessed.
A broken soul?
Threads of cerulean moon?
There is no error in your voice.
If I could find an error, I would be a liar.
Blessings to your soul, Yard
reply by the author on 04-Jul-2023
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It is difficult to speak of that which you are truly blessed.
A broken soul?
Threads of cerulean moon?
There is no error in your voice.
If I could find an error, I would be a liar.
Blessings to your soul, Yard
Comment Written 04-Jul-2023
reply by the author on 04-Jul-2023
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Thank you for the blessings, same for you, Yard. I'm so thankful four the kind words and outstanding six stars review.
Gypsy hugs
"Poetry heals the wounds inflicted by reason" -- Novalis
Comment from lyenochka
That's what the Lord does for us. It could be cerulean moon or some other more precious things. The main thing is that God will make us into a masterpiece putting all our broken pieces together.
reply by the author on 04-Jul-2023
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That's what the Lord does for us. It could be cerulean moon or some other more precious things. The main thing is that God will make us into a masterpiece putting all our broken pieces together.
Comment Written 04-Jul-2023
reply by the author on 04-Jul-2023
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Yes. Only God can mend our broken hearts and souls.
Love
Marival ❤️
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Comment from Alexandra Trovato
You are still in there. As long as you are, you have won your Soul back to heal. Ever experience that steals innocence will be punished by God. Keep healing and getting that precious girl back. love Alexan x
reply by the author on 04-Jul-2023
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You are still in there. As long as you are, you have won your Soul back to heal. Ever experience that steals innocence will be punished by God. Keep healing and getting that precious girl back. love Alexan x
Comment Written 04-Jul-2023
reply by the author on 04-Jul-2023
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Thank you very much. Alexan. I really appreciate your kind review.
Love
Marival ❤️
Comment from GWHARGIS
That would be so nice to have someone come to help heal you from a broken heart. But usually you have to be your own savior. Great poem. Loved the color of the moon. One of my favorite colors to paint with. Gretchen
reply by the author on 04-Jul-2023
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That would be so nice to have someone come to help heal you from a broken heart. But usually you have to be your own savior. Great poem. Loved the color of the moon. One of my favorite colors to paint with. Gretchen
Comment Written 04-Jul-2023
reply by the author on 04-Jul-2023
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Thank you very much. Gretchen. You always write beautiful reviews.
Gypsy hugs
Comment from JSD
Just stop now. This is ridiculous. Again, two distinct parts. Starts colloquial and ordinary and then on the key word, soul, it turns into gorgeousness with the climax of threads of moonlight tying up that broken thing. Just love it. X
reply by the author on 04-Jul-2023
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Just stop now. This is ridiculous. Again, two distinct parts. Starts colloquial and ordinary and then on the key word, soul, it turns into gorgeousness with the climax of threads of moonlight tying up that broken thing. Just love it. X
Comment Written 04-Jul-2023
reply by the author on 04-Jul-2023
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Thank you very much, my friend. I hope you are having a wonderful day.
Gypsy hugs
Comment from shelley kaye
cool eye pic - kinda creepy, but cool lol
i like this - it feels hopeful
and i like the blue colours
smooth flow and good imagery
thank you for sharing
shelley :)
reply by the author on 04-Jul-2023
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cool eye pic - kinda creepy, but cool lol
i like this - it feels hopeful
and i like the blue colours
smooth flow and good imagery
thank you for sharing
shelley :)
Comment Written 04-Jul-2023
reply by the author on 04-Jul-2023
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Thank you very much, my friend. I hope you are having a wonderful day.
Gypsy hugs