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2023 Gypsy's Haiku

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Comment from aryr
Exceptional
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Wow!!! This said it all, Gypsy. I really appreciated the dual pictures of the female wolf and the lovely young woman, then the wolf baying at the moon. I liked your words because they told the truth, she was protecting her pups. Blessed Be n Hugs!!!

 Comment Written 04-Jul-2023

reply by the author on 04-Jul-2023
    Thank you, Aryr, I appreciate your exceptional six stars review and kind words. Blessed be.

    Gypsy hugs
reply by aryr on 04-Jul-2023
    You are so welcome, Gypsy.
Comment from barbara.wilkey
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Wolves have always amazed me. I have seen them pack in the wild during horrible midwestern winters. I enjoyed your poem and also the artwork you chose. This is another great package.

 Comment Written 04-Jul-2023

reply by the author on 04-Jul-2023
    Thank you, Barbara, I appreciate your exceptional five stars review and kind words.

    Gypsy hugs
Comment from shelley kaye
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the wolf looks like a hellhound in that first picture LOL
wolf pics howling at the full moon are cool
didn't know there was a specific name for female wolves - interesting...
a great haiku with a protective meaning!
thank you for sharing
shelley :)


 Comment Written 04-Jul-2023

reply by the author on 04-Jul-2023
    Thank you, Shelley, I appreciate your exceptional five stars review and kind words.

    Gypsy hugs
Comment from GWHARGIS
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My spirit animal is the birder collie. I like to be in control even when things don't concern me. Lol. Maybe it's just being a Virgo. My way or busy. I liked your poem. I like that you explained the importance of the spirit animal in your author notes. Great job. Gretchen

 Comment Written 04-Jul-2023

reply by the author on 04-Jul-2023
    I'm a Virgo too!

    Thank you, Gretchen, I appreciate your exceptional five stars review

    Gypsy hugs
Comment from kahpot
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For some reason I have imagined you as this form of spirit, you project these attributes through your writing as with this one, an excellent read, very well presented****kahpot

 Comment Written 04-Jul-2023

reply by the author on 04-Jul-2023
    Thank you, kym, I appreciate your exceptional five stars review and kind words.

    Gypsy hugs
Comment from JSD
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An interesting piece with some graphic layout and artwork. Are you therefore a Native American? How do I know what my spirit animal is? Or do I not get one? I want one please.

 Comment Written 04-Jul-2023

reply by the author on 04-Jul-2023
    Thank you! I'm original from Spain, not native American. I lived most of my life in California.

    If you copy the link in your browser you will find the animal spirits information.

    https://themindfool.com/spirit-animal-list/

Comment from lyenochka
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I'm glad that you're a protective mom who lovingly cares for her children. Thanks for the information about the spirit animal and information about the luna wolf!

 Comment Written 03-Jul-2023

reply by the author on 03-Jul-2023
    Thank you very much for your time and kind review, big sister.

    Love,
    Marival ❤️

Comment from AP Apgar
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I like your Haiku poem - Excellent picture presentation - beautiful girl - nice wolf - good syllable count -poem flows nicely - story is clear and easy to understand - the Luna wolf is the protector and takes care of her pups et al. Notes are excellent, and explain the tribes history of their spirit symbol for protection./ protector. Nice job. AP
Happy 4th of July!!!!

 Comment Written 03-Jul-2023

reply by the author on 03-Jul-2023
    Happy 4th!

    Thank you very much for your time, kind review, and helpfull feedback.

    Gypsy hugs
Comment from Niki Marie
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So much truth in so from words.. I absolutely love this piece. The fury of a mother lioness symbolizes a fierceness unmatched.A personal favorite. A true masters piece. Very clever. Nicely done.

 Comment Written 03-Jul-2023

reply by the author on 03-Jul-2023
    Thank you very much for your time, kind review, and helpfull feedback.

    Gypsy hugs
Comment from Rachelle Allen
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Wow. This is SO majorly cool!! I love the artwork; it drew me it immediately. But the poem had such a mystical, ferocious vibe to it! Together, they made a startling, compelling statement that I found enticing. Great work!!! Very enjoyable post!!

 Comment Written 03-Jul-2023

reply by the author on 03-Jul-2023
    Thank you very much for your time, kind review, and helpfull feedback.

    Gypsy hugs
reply by Rachelle Allen on 03-Jul-2023
    My pleasure!