Angels Unaware
Viewing comments for Chapter 20 "Trailways and Crossroads"A Memoir and Love Story
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Comment from Alaskastory
"Trailways and Crossroads" moves along nicely and becomes exceptionally well done in the conversations. The dialog seemed so natural to both the situation and feeling of the speakers. Great progress on this one.
reply by the author on 07-Jul-2023
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"Trailways and Crossroads" moves along nicely and becomes exceptionally well done in the conversations. The dialog seemed so natural to both the situation and feeling of the speakers. Great progress on this one.
Comment Written 07-Jul-2023
reply by the author on 07-Jul-2023
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Thanks so much Marie! I really appreciate Knowing you like my true story.
Comment from davisr (Rhonda)
Tom, your chapter absolutely moved me, maybe even to tears if I want to be honest.
Mary seemed to be such a vulnerable young lady and such an amazing mother. The in laws are pretty incredible, too!
I'm glad you took that flight, my friend, and equally glad you've share your story.
Take care,
Rhonda
reply by the author on 03-Jul-2023
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Tom, your chapter absolutely moved me, maybe even to tears if I want to be honest.
Mary seemed to be such a vulnerable young lady and such an amazing mother. The in laws are pretty incredible, too!
I'm glad you took that flight, my friend, and equally glad you've share your story.
Take care,
Rhonda
Comment Written 03-Jul-2023
reply by the author on 03-Jul-2023
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Thanks again Rhonda, and when u get your story published I have some Facebook promotional clubs u might like.
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Oh, wow, yeah, please share that information with me.
Comment from lyenochka
Hooray for Mary's sister!! You had me worried that you were going to back out again and cause more grief to everyone. Hope God's guidance will lead to the right path.
I really liked "Life moved like a tapestry of scenes from a movie about the Heartland"
her parent's house (parents')
in and let goĆ¢?"to be vulnerable (go)
with all of it's colorful lights at night. (its)
reply by the author on 03-Jul-2023
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Hooray for Mary's sister!! You had me worried that you were going to back out again and cause more grief to everyone. Hope God's guidance will lead to the right path.
I really liked "Life moved like a tapestry of scenes from a movie about the Heartland"
her parent's house (parents')
in and let goĆ¢?"to be vulnerable (go)
with all of it's colorful lights at night. (its)
Comment Written 03-Jul-2023
reply by the author on 03-Jul-2023
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Yes, and I can't wait to tell Mary's sister she's in the book, after its ready to print.
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She had a pivotal role!
Comment from BethShelby
Well, I'm glad you finally got up the courage to go see Mary. I guess it took her sister to convince you but you weren't sorry. She is very pretty. Her family sure cared about you. I'm enjoying the story.
reply by the author on 03-Jul-2023
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Well, I'm glad you finally got up the courage to go see Mary. I guess it took her sister to convince you but you weren't sorry. She is very pretty. Her family sure cared about you. I'm enjoying the story.
Comment Written 03-Jul-2023
reply by the author on 03-Jul-2023
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Thanks Beth. I love writing something that needs no embellishment .
Comment from JSD
It always amazes me how big the US seems. Transport is so important in your tale and obviously so important to the nation. This provincial Brit wants to ride that bus!
reply by the author on 03-Jul-2023
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It always amazes me how big the US seems. Transport is so important in your tale and obviously so important to the nation. This provincial Brit wants to ride that bus!
Comment Written 03-Jul-2023
reply by the author on 03-Jul-2023
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Cross country Tran rides can be special too cross country. Thanks my friend from across the pond.
Comment from royowen
What a beautiful girl, and if she was as half as beautiful inside, you were a fool to let get away, I feel angry with you for letting her down, but I'm sure you'll more than make up for lost time, this is a fantastic post Stan, well done, blessings Roy
reply by the author on 03-Jul-2023
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What a beautiful girl, and if she was as half as beautiful inside, you were a fool to let get away, I feel angry with you for letting her down, but I'm sure you'll more than make up for lost time, this is a fantastic post Stan, well done, blessings Roy
Comment Written 03-Jul-2023
reply by the author on 03-Jul-2023
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Thanks Roy, but for Gods grace
Comment from Ben Colder
You were speaking about Trailways. I drove for Greyhound in 63-64 out of Houston. Knew drivers who drove for Trailways. Good story Stan. Is that Mary in the picture?
reply by the author on 03-Jul-2023
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You were speaking about Trailways. I drove for Greyhound in 63-64 out of Houston. Knew drivers who drove for Trailways. Good story Stan. Is that Mary in the picture?
Comment Written 03-Jul-2023
reply by the author on 03-Jul-2023
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Thanks again brother, and I do recall you're wife's name was Mary too. We were meant to encourage each other in our journey
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Yes she was Mary ANNE.
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Beautiful names together!
Comment from Earl Corp
I haven't read any of the other chapters so it would help if you put a cat of characters in your author's notes. I only found one error: Your there should be you're there. Thanks for sharing.
reply by the author on 03-Jul-2023
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I haven't read any of the other chapters so it would help if you put a cat of characters in your author's notes. I only found one error: Your there should be you're there. Thanks for sharing.
Comment Written 02-Jul-2023
reply by the author on 03-Jul-2023
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Yes, I should have. Thanks!
Comment from lancellot
Wow, you did do a foolish thing backing out and then almost backing out again. They are both beautiful. But, sometimes you just need a kick in the pants. You did a great job letting the reader into your mind, and you painted a good picture of the past.
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Wow, you did do a foolish thing backing out and then almost backing out again. They are both beautiful. But, sometimes you just need a kick in the pants. You did a great job letting the reader into your mind, and you painted a good picture of the past.
Comment Written 02-Jul-2023