Sun Still Rises
A rhyming poem38 total reviews
Comment from Chuck Keller
Profound and touching work here.
If it is biographical, I'm sorry for your loss. I've lost someone too.
Again
I appreciate your sharing personal thoughts through your poetry.
Keep up the great work
reply by the author on 25-Oct-2023
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Profound and touching work here.
If it is biographical, I'm sorry for your loss. I've lost someone too.
Again
I appreciate your sharing personal thoughts through your poetry.
Keep up the great work
Comment Written 25-Oct-2023
reply by the author on 25-Oct-2023
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Thanks, Chuck, for this surprising review. I didn't expect to read a review from a previous post, but I appreciate it nonetheless.
Yes, it is true, I lost my companion cat named Sunny. She was dear to my heart, and I miss her more every day.
Thanks for the kind review.
Jesse
Comment from MissMerri
Such a beautiful poem, Jesse, clearly an expression of love and grief from the deepest recesses of your heart. I found nothing in this lovely poem I thought could be improved. It is perfect as is. MM
reply by the author on 14-Aug-2023
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Such a beautiful poem, Jesse, clearly an expression of love and grief from the deepest recesses of your heart. I found nothing in this lovely poem I thought could be improved. It is perfect as is. MM
Comment Written 07-Aug-2023
reply by the author on 14-Aug-2023
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Thanks, my friend.
Your kindness is overwhelming.
Thanks for the six stars.
Enjoy your summer!
Jesse
Comment from Cindy Decker 2
Jesse,
Hi. I hope your road to recovery is a smooth one.
This beautiful poem deserves a six-star review. I get beautiful images with your profound, bittersweet words.
"Change is clearly an eternal song..." is such a unique way of describing change.
Good luck, Jesse.
Please let me know about your progress after your back operation.
Ada,
Blessings,
Cindy
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Jesse,
Hi. I hope your road to recovery is a smooth one.
This beautiful poem deserves a six-star review. I get beautiful images with your profound, bittersweet words.
"Change is clearly an eternal song..." is such a unique way of describing change.
Good luck, Jesse.
Please let me know about your progress after your back operation.
Ada,
Blessings,
Cindy
Comment Written 17-Jul-2023
Comment from mermaids
This is a wonderful grief poem. I am touched by your words and my condolences on Sunny's passing. "Combine sweet dreams with heartbreaking grief" are two perfect lines that capture feelings. I can relate.
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This is a wonderful grief poem. I am touched by your words and my condolences on Sunny's passing. "Combine sweet dreams with heartbreaking grief" are two perfect lines that capture feelings. I can relate.
Comment Written 05-Jul-2023
Comment from Raul1
I have enjoyed reading your beautifully written poem. It is clear and concise. I can understand reading your poem. Thank you for sharing! It's interesting. Nice job!
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I have enjoyed reading your beautifully written poem. It is clear and concise. I can understand reading your poem. Thank you for sharing! It's interesting. Nice job!
Comment Written 05-Jul-2023
Comment from Lisasview
I am new on this site so I do not know who Sunny is... Perhaps your wife?
I am so sorry for your loss and hope that each day brings you closer to peace..
This is such a lovely heartfelt poem dear Jesse.
Lisasview, new to this site
reply by the author on 05-Jul-2023
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I am new on this site so I do not know who Sunny is... Perhaps your wife?
I am so sorry for your loss and hope that each day brings you closer to peace..
This is such a lovely heartfelt poem dear Jesse.
Lisasview, new to this site
Comment Written 05-Jul-2023
reply by the author on 05-Jul-2023
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Welcome to our writer's site!
Sunny was my cat. I loved her so much! She was my favorite kitty of all time!
I appreciate your kind comments.
Again, welcome to Fan Story!
Jesse
Comment from Kaiku
It's a saying that goes without saying, the sun will still rise in the morning no matter waht has taken place prior. It doesn't make a loss any more easier to handle. Nice poem.
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It's a saying that goes without saying, the sun will still rise in the morning no matter waht has taken place prior. It doesn't make a loss any more easier to handle. Nice poem.
Comment Written 04-Jul-2023
Comment from Debbie D'Arcy
A sweet little verse conveying a sense of nature carrying on despite our own transience in this world. Your verse has a 4-5-4-5 count in three rhyming stanzas. Thanks for sharing. Debbie
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A sweet little verse conveying a sense of nature carrying on despite our own transience in this world. Your verse has a 4-5-4-5 count in three rhyming stanzas. Thanks for sharing. Debbie
Comment Written 04-Jul-2023
Comment from Pam Lonsdale
Jesse, this is fabulous! I think this is the first poem I've read from you.
Of note: pleasant memories mix with misery. Isn't that the way death plays upon our psyches.
Life goes on, but I'm sorry you must do so without Sunny.
xo
Pam
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Jesse, this is fabulous! I think this is the first poem I've read from you.
Of note: pleasant memories mix with misery. Isn't that the way death plays upon our psyches.
Life goes on, but I'm sorry you must do so without Sunny.
xo
Pam
Comment Written 04-Jul-2023
Comment from dragonpoet
Hi James,
A pet is a member of your family so you grieve for it like you would a person. I takes time and then the memories are just fun.
Keep writing and stay healthy
Joan
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Hi James,
A pet is a member of your family so you grieve for it like you would a person. I takes time and then the memories are just fun.
Keep writing and stay healthy
Joan
Comment Written 04-Jul-2023