Comment from Mark D. R.

Excellent

Gypsy,

I do like the imagery of the moon rocks being caressed by the fading light. Your color scheme and illustration package works in sync with your verse.

Mark

 Comment Written 03-Jul-2023

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reply by the author on 03-Jul-2023

Thank you very much for your time, kind review, and helpfull feedback.

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Comment from kahpot

Excellent

"stardust dusk" what a wonderful image as they caress the rocks, a beautiful presentation, an excellent satori, very well written with great artwork****kahpot

 Comment Written 02-Jul-2023

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reply by the author on 03-Jul-2023

Thank you very much for your time, kind review, and helpfull feedback.

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Comment from Shirley E Kennedy

Exceptional

You have an amazing talent for poetry and presentation.
As Always this clever Haiku is attests to those skills I've mentioned.
It is a perfect pairing of word and image and truly a pleasure to read.
Blessings
Shirley

 Comment Written 02-Jul-2023

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reply by the author on 03-Jul-2023

Thank you very much for your time, exceptional six stars review, and helpfull feedback.

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Comment from aryr

Excellent

What a great haiku, Gypsy. I loved your dual pictures were of a sunset, a dusk. Your words were almost priceless because they showed it mentioned the stardust, it mentioned the water and it mentioned moon rocks. Blessed Be n Hugs!!!

 Comment Written 02-Jul-2023

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reply by the author on 02-Jul-2023

Thank you very much for taking the time to read and review my poem. Blessed be.

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reply by aryr on 02-Jul-2023

Most welcome, Gypsy.

Comment from barbara.wilkey

Excellent

You have the sky, river, and ground all working together in this beautifully written poem. Thank you for sharing this club entry with us. Once again, you have presented us with a perfect package.

 Comment Written 02-Jul-2023

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reply by the author on 02-Jul-2023

Thank you for the excellent review. May you have a wonderful day, Barbara.

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Comment from shelley kaye

Excellent

ooh i love the image of star dust caressing moon rocks at dusk!
cool pics and colours, too.

great haiku!
thank you for sharing
shelley :)

 Comment Written 02-Jul-2023

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reply by the author on 02-Jul-2023

Thank you for understanding and for the excellent review. May you have a wonderful day, Shelley.

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Comment from Verna Cole Mitchell

Excellent

This is a beautiful haiku, and the picture complements it well. I like particularly the consonance with the letter "r." This is an example of excellence in haiku writing.

 Comment Written 02-Jul-2023

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reply by the author on 02-Jul-2023

Thank you for understanding and for the excellent review. May you have a wonderful day, Verna.

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Comment from JSD

Excellent

Once again I find myself angry and jealous that you seem to turn these gorgeous phrases out so easily and effectively. Moon rocks is amazing. Your verbs are perfect and so carefully chosen.

 Comment Written 02-Jul-2023

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reply by the author on 02-Jul-2023

hehehe.... it comes easy because I practice a lot and i don't always write a good one but it's okay.

Thank you for understanding and for the excellent review. May you have a wonderful day, JSD.

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Comment from AP Apgar

Excellent

I like your haiku poem- good picture presentation - poem has a good syllable count- flows well- paints a nice picture of moon dusk moving over the rocks - good job AP

 Comment Written 02-Jul-2023

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reply by the author on 02-Jul-2023

Thank you very much, ap :)

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Comment from Teri7

Excellent

This is a very beautiful and well written 3-8-5 haiku. You used very beautiful presentation, imagery and very good descriptive words. Thanks for sharing. love and blessings, Teri

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 Comment Written 01-Jul-2023

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reply by the author on 01-Jul-2023

Thank you very much for your time, kind review, and helpfull feedback.

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reply by Teri7 on 02-Jul-2023

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