My True Happiness
Contest Entry2 total reviews
Comment from JSD
A sweet, happy little rhyming poem. I'm not sure the last stanza is as good as the first two but I wish you all the best in the competition.
John
"Seeing through a glass darkly."
reply by the author on 01-Jul-2023
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A sweet, happy little rhyming poem. I'm not sure the last stanza is as good as the first two but I wish you all the best in the competition.
John
"Seeing through a glass darkly."
Comment Written 01-Jul-2023
reply by the author on 01-Jul-2023
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Thank you so much!
Comment from Lisasview
Fun poem but I found an obvious spelling error so I gave you a 4 Star in hopes that you correct it...this is why I check my work so many times..
Happiness is such a good contest prompt... I just love all the many thought that go through my head as I think about it....
Lisasview, new to the site
reply by the author on 01-Jul-2023
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Fun poem but I found an obvious spelling error so I gave you a 4 Star in hopes that you correct it...this is why I check my work so many times..
Happiness is such a good contest prompt... I just love all the many thought that go through my head as I think about it....
Lisasview, new to the site
Comment Written 01-Jul-2023
reply by the author on 01-Jul-2023
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Thank you for your help and kind review! I have fixed it. Is it good enough for five stars rating now? Can you please take another look?