Be Wee With Bea Part 3
Viewing comments for Chapter 24 "The Mysterious Bag"Third in a series is quite sad in the beginning.
10 total reviews
Comment from judith layne jerdé
Liz, Another fun chapter, I hate to see it come to a end. You have a most delightful and unique way of spinning a yarn. I look forward to reading more of your work.
reply by the author on 20-Jul-2023
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Liz, Another fun chapter, I hate to see it come to a end. You have a most delightful and unique way of spinning a yarn. I look forward to reading more of your work.
Comment Written 19-Jul-2023
reply by the author on 20-Jul-2023
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Thank you for your lovely review. There are 2 other books. You feel free to check them out in my portfolio. No review is necessary, just in enjoy.
Comment from aryr
This was a great continuation chapter, Liz. Bea was definitely intense on her adventures. She and Billie Bear parted as friends, even though Jazzy made a difference they which they were able to live with and they parted as friends. Meanwhile, Bea was stuck with Sammy. Very well done and greatly enjoyed. Blessings n Hugs!!!
reply by the author on 02-Jul-2023
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This was a great continuation chapter, Liz. Bea was definitely intense on her adventures. She and Billie Bear parted as friends, even though Jazzy made a difference they which they were able to live with and they parted as friends. Meanwhile, Bea was stuck with Sammy. Very well done and greatly enjoyed. Blessings n Hugs!!!
Comment Written 02-Jul-2023
reply by the author on 02-Jul-2023
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Thank you for your involved review. I'm glad your are enjoying the series.
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You are most welcome, Liz.
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***Smile***
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***Bigger Smile***
Comment from strandregs
I wish I knew how to write for this age group
Your story brings up images of my daughter saying : whatever you want to tell me I don't want to hear.
An autistic brought up by a Narcissist.
Yep. My memories are water under the bridge.
Write them down she says.
Maybe one day.
So I humm like a bear and write a silly poem.
"Revenge" is sweat. :-))Z.
reply by the author on 02-Jul-2023
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I wish I knew how to write for this age group
Your story brings up images of my daughter saying : whatever you want to tell me I don't want to hear.
An autistic brought up by a Narcissist.
Yep. My memories are water under the bridge.
Write them down she says.
Maybe one day.
So I humm like a bear and write a silly poem.
"Revenge" is sweat. :-))Z.
Comment Written 02-Jul-2023
reply by the author on 02-Jul-2023
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Thank you for your appreciative review. I taught these grades. Someone challenged me to write for kids older. I wouldn't know where to begin. I am unable to write the brilliant poetry you do.
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Thank you for the warm compliment
Blessings.:-))Z.
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***Hugs***
Comment from patcelaw
This is another well written chapter in your book and I appreciated listening to it. I wish you the very best in all of your writing. May you have a good weekend and a good week. Patricia
reply by the author on 01-Jul-2023
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This is another well written chapter in your book and I appreciated listening to it. I wish you the very best in all of your writing. May you have a good weekend and a good week. Patricia
Comment Written 01-Jul-2023
reply by the author on 01-Jul-2023
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Thank you for your appreciative review. I'm glad you are enjoying it.
Comment from lyenochka
Seems like Bea is rewarded for the goodness and bigness of her heart to welcome Sammy into her life. Sammy is apparently a really good scrounger and knows how to turn up honey in dumpsters!
as kitty's are wont to do. (kitties) I think you meant the plural here
reply by the author on 01-Jul-2023
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Seems like Bea is rewarded for the goodness and bigness of her heart to welcome Sammy into her life. Sammy is apparently a really good scrounger and knows how to turn up honey in dumpsters!
as kitty's are wont to do. (kitties) I think you meant the plural here
Comment Written 01-Jul-2023
reply by the author on 01-Jul-2023
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Thank you for your appreciative review.
Comment from Sally Law
A sweet book chapter of Bea the Wee Bear and friends. I especially liked the stacked stones to remember the way so as not to forget. A delightful read, Liz dear. Sending you my best today as always.
Sal XOs
reply by the author on 01-Jul-2023
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A sweet book chapter of Bea the Wee Bear and friends. I especially liked the stacked stones to remember the way so as not to forget. A delightful read, Liz dear. Sending you my best today as always.
Sal XOs
Comment Written 01-Jul-2023
reply by the author on 01-Jul-2023
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Thank you for your appreciative review. I'm glad you have enjoyed it.
Comment from royowen
A great episode for the kids, mind you there are great characters to write for the average nine year old. Bears are very popular with kids, I love these adventures, you magically make these characters live, beautifully written Liz, blessings Roy
reply by the author on 01-Jul-2023
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A great episode for the kids, mind you there are great characters to write for the average nine year old. Bears are very popular with kids, I love these adventures, you magically make these characters live, beautifully written Liz, blessings Roy
Comment Written 01-Jul-2023
reply by the author on 01-Jul-2023
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Thank you for your appreciative review. I am honored to receive 6 stars
Comment from barbara.wilkey
This story has so much to offer children. Thank you for writing and sharing it.
Although bears and cats and dog have adequate night vision, this at times became problematic. (bears, cats, and dogs...)
reply by the author on 01-Jul-2023
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This story has so much to offer children. Thank you for writing and sharing it.
Although bears and cats and dog have adequate night vision, this at times became problematic. (bears, cats, and dogs...)
Comment Written 01-Jul-2023
reply by the author on 01-Jul-2023
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Thank you for your lovely review. I'm glad you appreciate it.
Comment from JSD
Once again the language and the content are just right for the age group. This is light and fun with just a little bit of seriousness creeping in at times.
reply by the author on 01-Jul-2023
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Once again the language and the content are just right for the age group. This is light and fun with just a little bit of seriousness creeping in at times.
Comment Written 01-Jul-2023
reply by the author on 01-Jul-2023
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Thank you for your lovely review. I'm glad you appreciate it.
Comment from Debbie D'Arcy
As ever a well written and expressed story which would of course be an absolute delight to the young. The quest to find Sammy something to eat is vividly conveyed and I enjoyed the 'soon to be golden coated teeth' which is guaranteed to charm little children. I think your cast of characters is missing Jazzy and perhaps Sammy and Billie should be included although I accept you describe them in your intro. Well done, Liz, on another well penned chapter. Debbie
reply by the author on 01-Jul-2023
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As ever a well written and expressed story which would of course be an absolute delight to the young. The quest to find Sammy something to eat is vividly conveyed and I enjoyed the 'soon to be golden coated teeth' which is guaranteed to charm little children. I think your cast of characters is missing Jazzy and perhaps Sammy and Billie should be included although I accept you describe them in your intro. Well done, Liz, on another well penned chapter. Debbie
Comment Written 01-Jul-2023
reply by the author on 01-Jul-2023
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Thank you for your lovely review. I'm glad you appreciate it.
