Comment from barbara.wilkey

Excellent

Being a Christian, I am absolutely positive once the body dies the spirit lives on forever. We are much more than just a body. How our spirit lives depends on how we spent our live on Earth. Thank you for sharing.

 Comment Written 01-Jul-2023

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reply by the author on 01-Jul-2023

Being a Latter-Day Saint Priest, I too agree with you.
Thanks Barbara and have a wonderful day.
Doctor Ricky

Comment from dellsworthpoet

Excellent

An interesting view of a common subject. The flow is good. The images are clear. The rhymes are unforced. The narrative stays on point. And the comments call for reflection.

Thanks for a good read.

 Comment Written 30-Jun-2023

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reply by the author on 01-Jul-2023

Thank you for sharing your review and also your comments.
Have a great weekend.
Doctor Ricky

reply by dellsworthpoet on 01-Jul-2023

You are welcome. You have a good week end also.

Comment from Dolly'sPoems

Excellent

It is a pity you feel such sorrow like this Ricky and grief can be a dark place where we feel dead and dormant, I hope some light shines on your life, love Dolly x

 Comment Written 30-Jun-2023

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reply by the author on 01-Jul-2023

Thanks for your review Dolly.
The object of this piece is to more or less bring out feelings of grief and the pain that grief can draw us into.
Thanks for sharing this and have a great day.
Doctor Ricky