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Winter In The Rockaways

Beach Town

2 total reviews 
Comment from Lisasview
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What a lovely poem to read as I sit here at the spa waiting for my husband and listing to Zen type music...
Your words made it easy to visualize.
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 Comment Written 30-Jun-2023

reply by the author on 30-Jun-2023
    Im glad you liked it. Wishing you greatness in your writing here at Fanstory.

    Thank you
    Judith
Comment from Debbie D'Arcy
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Lovely, atmospheric and a joy to read. I can really sense the cold, the emptiness and yet those memories still lingering on about happy times. The fitting simplicity of your words, enhanced by the image, makes it for me. Well done! Debbie

 Comment Written 30-Jun-2023

reply by the author on 30-Jun-2023
    Wow! What a beautiful review. I was afraid i would never receive another review from you again after my replies the other day. I apologize for that. I was having a moment lol

    Thank you Deb
reply by Debbie D'Arcy on 30-Jun-2023
    Oh I understood this one completely!
reply by the author on 30-Jun-2023
    Im glad
reply by the author on 30-Jun-2023
    Sometimes a poem it comes immediately with no revisions like this one.
reply by Debbie D'Arcy on 30-Jun-2023
    It's so atmospheric and relatable - that contrasting seascape and moods...
reply by the author on 30-Jun-2023
    I thought the illustration was perfect. So beautiful
reply by Debbie D'Arcy on 30-Jun-2023
    Yes