Comment from lyenochka

Excellent

I think you did a superb job with this Rhyming Wave form. I liked how you said that you lived your life "through colors prime" as it speaks to me of the purity of your character and that part never fades.

 Comment Written 29-Jun-2023

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reply by the author on 30-Jun-2023

Hi Helen Thank you for your review and yes, I try to keep my colours bright (a little faded sometimes lol) This was a fun style to try and I enjoy a new challenge.

PS Also have a new grandson harry he is 6 weeks old and very cute
We now have 5 gorgeous granddaughters and a little boy, so my time over the past few weeks has been busy with him and editing my book.

Cheers and a hug Chris

reply by lyenochka on 30-Jun-2023

How wonderful! Congratulations again! I remember you saying that your son was expecting a child. Wow, six grandchildren! You are so blessed!!

Comment from Pearl Edwards

Excellent

A lovely topic for your Rhyming Wave poem Christine. I love that though you are ageing, ain't that my truth, your colour pallette remains bright and colourful. A lovely, positive write. Cheers
Valda

 Comment Written 29-Jun-2023

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reply by the author on 30-Jun-2023

Hi Valda, Thank you for your lovely review and yes our colours get a bit faded lol, however i enjoyed the rhyming style and so nice to hear from you

Cheers Chris

Comment from Jannypan (Jan)

Excellent

You did a great job, Chrissy, with your club poem.
I enjoyed reading it. Great work with the required
rhyme scheme and metered lines. I liked the progression
of time you words showed and the different uses of colors
in the stages of your life. You presented a view of how
you look at life--always positive.
Thanks for participating, Jan

 Comment Written 27-Jun-2023

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reply by the author on 27-Jun-2023

Thanks Jan it was a fun style to try another new one and I enjoy this club so well done to you too
Alway try to stay in touch
Cheers Chrisx

Comment from aryr

Excellent

This was so entertaining while fundamental, Chris. I really enjoyed your rhyming wave. Life goes on, justifying so, I liked how you created the colors. They were important to you. Very well done and greatly enjoyed. Blessings n Hugs!!!

 Comment Written 27-Jun-2023

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reply by the author on 27-Jun-2023

Hi Alie Thank you , these club challenges are a good way to stretch ones writing skills and see what we can come up with
Need some colour in Winter here bleak and dull outside lol
Cheers Chris xxx

reply by aryr on 27-Jun-2023

Will definitely send you some heat. You are so welcome, Chris.

Comment from Pam Lonsdale

Excellent

I'm not sure about the requirements for this or whether you met them or not, but I really enjoyed the sing-song effect it seemed to have as I was reading it. I can imagine that I'll be walking about the house tonight singing "it's time to put my jammies on, my jammies on, my jammies on . . ."

Delightful!

Pam

 Comment Written 26-Jun-2023

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reply by the author on 27-Jun-2023

Hi Pam Thanks you, and yes put your jammies, jammies, jammies, on lol This style does have a singy effect but a bit of fun and a challenge to write
Glad you like it

Cheers Chris

Comment from Gloria ....

Excellent

This is a most interesting form as it does lend the sense of a wave coming and coming on itself.

Your motif works well here and your final two lines deliver the core message.

A pleasure to read and review. :)

Gloria

 Comment Written 26-Jun-2023

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reply by the author on 27-Jun-2023

Hi Gloria, Thank you, and yes, it is a new style for me and does have a quirky kind of rhythm, I had fun with the waves

Cheers Chris x

Comment from Dolly'sPoems

Excellent

You did a great job with this form Christine and I adored your repeated lines to drive home your point. This is a fine post for the club, much enjoyed, love Dolly x

 Comment Written 26-Jun-2023

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reply by the author on 27-Jun-2023

Hi Christine, Thank you and I always like to try out new styles to exercise, exercise, exercise my muse lol

Cheers Chris

Comment from royowen

Excellent

I'm not fond of this form, there's been a few that have come up in recent times that are not used much these days, but I do know the urge to try different ones to develop one's writing perception, so well done.you, and Jan who runs it, well done, blessings Chris, Roy

 Comment Written 26-Jun-2023

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reply by the author on 27-Jun-2023

Hi Roy, Thank you, and as it was a new style, I thought I would give it a go and blame my muse, she dictates my words ha ha

Cheers Chris

reply by royowen on 27-Jun-2023

It?s fine Chris

Comment from Bill Schott

Excellent

This wave poem, Colors Prime, has the proper formatting and speaks to the extension of youth through the conscious and purposeful efforts of keeping life vibrant. Neat.

 Comment Written 26-Jun-2023

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reply by the author on 26-Jun-2023

Hi Bill many thanks for your review for this one I enjoyed the challenge and yes the colours are a little blended now lol
Cheers Chris

Comment from Sugarray77

Excellent

What a charming poem, Chris. I love your Rhyming Wave and can feel the rolling rhythm in the receptive places. You have chosen a wonderful theme that we can all relate too as well. Great job.

Melissa

 Comment Written 26-Jun-2023

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reply by the author on 26-Jun-2023

Hi Melissa Thank you and I enjoyed having a go at this potlatch challenge another one to store away
Yes sometimes our colours fade a bit lol
Cheers Chris