Reflections in Life
Refined Trijan8 total reviews
Comment from JSD
A complex form made impressive by your evocative and engaging writing. You use the rhyming to enhance your impressive thoughts and have created a beautiful piece here.
reply by the author on 30-Jul-2023
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A complex form made impressive by your evocative and engaging writing. You use the rhyming to enhance your impressive thoughts and have created a beautiful piece here.
Comment Written 28-Jun-2023
reply by the author on 30-Jul-2023
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Thank you kindly 😊
Comment from WalkerMan
In this well composed Refined Trijan REFRAIN, the first stanza reflects the joys of childhood innocence. The second stanza lauds the worthiness of the "tapestry of highs 'n lows" as life's pendulum swings "'tween timeless love and grief" because of the free choices we learn to make wisely. The third stanza tells us that a smart choice is to love those we meet along the way, thereby sharing God's grace leading to the "life worth living" we all crave. Superb, and provokes deep thought.
reply by the author on 30-Jul-2023
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In this well composed Refined Trijan REFRAIN, the first stanza reflects the joys of childhood innocence. The second stanza lauds the worthiness of the "tapestry of highs 'n lows" as life's pendulum swings "'tween timeless love and grief" because of the free choices we learn to make wisely. The third stanza tells us that a smart choice is to love those we meet along the way, thereby sharing God's grace leading to the "life worth living" we all crave. Superb, and provokes deep thought.
Comment Written 25-Jun-2023
reply by the author on 30-Jul-2023
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Thank you Mike for another outstanding review😊
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You are most welcome, Susan. I remain impressed by your mastery of over fifty poetic forms, and more on the way. Brava! -- Mike
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😊 Thank you Mike
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:))
Comment from Douglas Goff
This was very nice and the photo only added to your lovely vision.
My favorite stanza due to its natural flow:
Life's pendulum so quickly flows
'tween timeless love and grief.
Weaves tapestry of highs 'n lows
in fine-laced golden leaf.
This is well-done and presented.
D
reply by the author on 30-Jul-2023
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This was very nice and the photo only added to your lovely vision.
My favorite stanza due to its natural flow:
Life's pendulum so quickly flows
'tween timeless love and grief.
Weaves tapestry of highs 'n lows
in fine-laced golden leaf.
This is well-done and presented.
D
Comment Written 25-Jun-2023
reply by the author on 30-Jul-2023
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Thank you kindly 😊
Comment from royowen
An excellent post Susan, oh yes, love will always triumph, it is eternal, nothing can rule over love, it is above the law impervious to defeat, a solid rock in a Sandy desert, a beautifully written trijan refrain, well done, a terrific post, blessings Roy
reply by the author on 30-Jul-2023
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An excellent post Susan, oh yes, love will always triumph, it is eternal, nothing can rule over love, it is above the law impervious to defeat, a solid rock in a Sandy desert, a beautifully written trijan refrain, well done, a terrific post, blessings Roy
Comment Written 25-Jun-2023
reply by the author on 30-Jul-2023
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Hi Roy! Thank you so much 😊
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Most welcome
Comment from patcelaw
Are usually do not review a post that has only two cents and one point in the pay off, but I am so glad that I did read your work. Your work is beautiful. I wish you had been able to give more cents for the writing. I feel if you could've promoted it more you would've gotten many more reviews. Patricia.
reply by the author on 25-Jun-2023
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Are usually do not review a post that has only two cents and one point in the pay off, but I am so glad that I did read your work. Your work is beautiful. I wish you had been able to give more cents for the writing. I feel if you could've promoted it more you would've gotten many more reviews. Patricia.
Comment Written 25-Jun-2023
reply by the author on 25-Jun-2023
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Hello Patricia, I just posted this last night. I?m just logging on this morning because I had a minute. Honestly Pat, I hardly ever thing about the "pay off"? heck I?m still reading Deans work simply because it?s magical and he?s been gone for some time now. But your point is taken. I could promote this one. Thank you for taking a look at this :) very much appreciated.
Comment from Sally Law
Magnificent poem in a new form to me. The overcoming with love theme takes it over the top. A poetry gem, beautifully composed and illustrated, my friend.
Sending you my best today as always,
Sal XOs
reply by the author on 30-Jul-2023
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Magnificent poem in a new form to me. The overcoming with love theme takes it over the top. A poetry gem, beautifully composed and illustrated, my friend.
Sending you my best today as always,
Sal XOs
Comment Written 25-Jun-2023
reply by the author on 30-Jul-2023
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Thank you kindly Sally. 😊 Another lovely review from you!
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Most welcome! Always a delight to read your fine poetry and learn. Sal XOs
Comment from Debbie D'Arcy
This is a very well crafted and beautiful verse which I thoroughly enjoyed reading! Your story unfolds like life itself and the flow and rhyming pattern give a great sense of cohesion to the reader's journey. Your imagery enriches but is not overdone (cluttering the words and masking the message). It's a very fine piece, undoubtedly worthy of winning a contest. Well done, Susan! Debbie
reply by the author on 30-Jul-2023
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This is a very well crafted and beautiful verse which I thoroughly enjoyed reading! Your story unfolds like life itself and the flow and rhyming pattern give a great sense of cohesion to the reader's journey. Your imagery enriches but is not overdone (cluttering the words and masking the message). It's a very fine piece, undoubtedly worthy of winning a contest. Well done, Susan! Debbie
Comment Written 25-Jun-2023
reply by the author on 30-Jul-2023
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Thank you Debbie for this wonderful review and six shiny stars!! Much appreciated 😊
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
A fine well rhymed poem Susan and your work is always a pleasure to read, well metered and a loving sentiment here. I love your profile picture too! Beautiful ladies, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 30-Jul-2023
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A fine well rhymed poem Susan and your work is always a pleasure to read, well metered and a loving sentiment here. I love your profile picture too! Beautiful ladies, love Dolly x
Comment Written 25-Jun-2023
reply by the author on 30-Jul-2023
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Thank you kindly Dolly 😊
