Your Greatest Strength
Nonet about the role that Faith can play.19 total reviews
Comment from dragonpoet
Hi Lisa,
This nonet reminds us of the power of prayer in personal and worldly bad times. Faith gives strength to get through to the other side.
Keep writing and stay healthy.
Congrats on placing second in the contest.
Have a great day and weekend.
Joan
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Hi Lisa,
This nonet reminds us of the power of prayer in personal and worldly bad times. Faith gives strength to get through to the other side.
Keep writing and stay healthy.
Congrats on placing second in the contest.
Have a great day and weekend.
Joan
Comment Written 07-Jul-2023
Comment from jim vecchio
Prayer DOES change things! I'm thankful people prayed for me when
I needed it (and I still do!) A Nonet of much Net Worth! thank you for honoring a afithful God!
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Prayer DOES change things! I'm thankful people prayed for me when
I needed it (and I still do!) A Nonet of much Net Worth! thank you for honoring a afithful God!
Comment Written 05-Jul-2023
Comment from lyenochka
Great job with your rhyming nonet poem with the spiritual message of the remedy to life's troubles in faithful prayer. Beautiful nonet shape, too, which means you had to consider the font and length of each word more than just the syllable count. Best wishes in the contest!
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Great job with your rhyming nonet poem with the spiritual message of the remedy to life's troubles in faithful prayer. Beautiful nonet shape, too, which means you had to consider the font and length of each word more than just the syllable count. Best wishes in the contest!
Comment Written 29-Jun-2023
Comment from Mia Twysted
I love the message you are sending to the reader. You say I know things have gone awry, but there is more out there if you sit calm and give yourself over.
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I love the message you are sending to the reader. You say I know things have gone awry, but there is more out there if you sit calm and give yourself over.
Comment Written 26-Jun-2023
Comment from Bill Schott
This nonet, Your Greatest Strength, has the proper formatting and reminds those who know that the power of prayer is undeniable and available to all at any time and everywhere.
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This nonet, Your Greatest Strength, has the proper formatting and reminds those who know that the power of prayer is undeniable and available to all at any time and everywhere.
Comment Written 26-Jun-2023
Comment from Father Flaps
Hi Lisa,
A lot of people worry instead of praying. Worry does no good. It causes high blood pressure, and migraine headaches. The Bible says, "Be careful for nothing; but in every thing by prayer and supplication with thanksgiving let your requests be made known unto God.
And the peace of God, which passeth all understanding, shall keep your hearts and minds through Christ Jesus."
I enjoyed your rhyming nonet. You tell these verses from Philippians in your own way,
"Faith can be your greatest strength.
Don't keep it at arm's length;
put hope in your heart.
Make a fresh start.
This is how:
just pray
now."
Nicely penned! Good Luck in the contest!
Hugs,
Kimbob
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Hi Lisa,
A lot of people worry instead of praying. Worry does no good. It causes high blood pressure, and migraine headaches. The Bible says, "Be careful for nothing; but in every thing by prayer and supplication with thanksgiving let your requests be made known unto God.
And the peace of God, which passeth all understanding, shall keep your hearts and minds through Christ Jesus."
I enjoyed your rhyming nonet. You tell these verses from Philippians in your own way,
"Faith can be your greatest strength.
Don't keep it at arm's length;
put hope in your heart.
Make a fresh start.
This is how:
just pray
now."
Nicely penned! Good Luck in the contest!
Hugs,
Kimbob
Comment Written 26-Jun-2023
Comment from Ginda Simpson
A perfect syllable count for your nonet, but the added rhyme is really nice and makes this gentle message a delight to read. A good entry for the contest. Best of luck.
reply by the author on 25-Jun-2023
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A perfect syllable count for your nonet, but the added rhyme is really nice and makes this gentle message a delight to read. A good entry for the contest. Best of luck.
Comment Written 25-Jun-2023
reply by the author on 25-Jun-2023
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Thanks very much for your kind comments, Ginda.
Comment from Wendy G
A perfectly shaped Nonet, with a meaningful theme. Well done for including smooth rhyme and flow as well. Your first lines with the two questions hook the reader, for I think most of us feel that that is so. Best wishes for the contest.
Wendy
reply by the author on 25-Jun-2023
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A perfectly shaped Nonet, with a meaningful theme. Well done for including smooth rhyme and flow as well. Your first lines with the two questions hook the reader, for I think most of us feel that that is so. Best wishes for the contest.
Wendy
Comment Written 24-Jun-2023
reply by the author on 25-Jun-2023
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Good morning Wendy. Thanks for your kind review.
Comment from patcelaw
You did an excellent job, creating the nonet for the contest. I wish you the very best in the contest. You have presented it well and it looks beautiful on the page. Patricia.
reply by the author on 25-Jun-2023
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You did an excellent job, creating the nonet for the contest. I wish you the very best in the contest. You have presented it well and it looks beautiful on the page. Patricia.
Comment Written 24-Jun-2023
reply by the author on 25-Jun-2023
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Thanks for your kind remarks, Patricia.
Comment from royowen
Uhuh, uhuh and uhuh, sometimes I think my life is just a shambles, that nothing seems to make any sense, but somehow God gives order to my chaotic life, beautifully written Jenny, blessings Roy
reply by the author on 24-Jun-2023
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Uhuh, uhuh and uhuh, sometimes I think my life is just a shambles, that nothing seems to make any sense, but somehow God gives order to my chaotic life, beautifully written Jenny, blessings Roy
Comment Written 24-Jun-2023
reply by the author on 24-Jun-2023
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Thanks for reviewing Roy. Hope you will have a wonderful Sunday.
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You too