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The eyes

Too hard to hide

2 total reviews 
Comment from JSD
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That's deep. Three perfect rhymes and some clever thinking going on in these mere eight syllables. I am impressed at how much you have expressed about humanity here.

 Comment Written 21-Jun-2023

reply by the author on 21-Jun-2023
    Thank you so much for the great review.
Comment from Paul Manton
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Dear friend, This is very good 1-6-1 poem, as it not only keeps the rules precisely, but has a really good twist at the end. Great choice of picture, if a bit melodramatic.
Makes the point. Thank you.
Paul

 Comment Written 21-Jun-2023

reply by the author on 21-Jun-2023
    Many thanks for the great review.
reply by Paul Manton on 21-Jun-2023
    You're welcome.

    Paul