Comment from Mario PIERRE

Excellent

Great encouragement poem. Conforms to the specified format. The picture is quite telling and matches your menage. You have created, in so few words, a strong message which resonates, specially in these dire times!!!

 Comment Written 23-Jun-2023

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reply by the author on 23-Jun-2023

Thank you for this great review. :)

Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose

Excellent

Wonderful-- Rhymed 1-6-1 writing -- prompt entry for the Contest.
Good rhyme that doesn't sound forced. Nice presentation and imagery. Good luck in the contest.

Gypsy
"The poet waits quietly to paint the unsaid." - Atticus

 Comment Written 22-Jun-2023

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reply by the author on 23-Jun-2023

Thank you, I really appreciate this terrific review. :)

Comment from Dolly'sPoems

Excellent

I enjoyed the fine sentiments behind these words as team work always achieves great goals in life and I enjoyed your fun poem here for the contest, love Dolly x

 Comment Written 22-Jun-2023

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reply by the author on 23-Jun-2023

Thank you for taking time to read and review my poem. :)

Comment from Lisasview

Excellent

Okay, this is great and really quite clever...
The words within the box of the image makes your 1-3-1 poem really stand out...
I wish you the very best of luck in the contest....
Lisasview, new to this site

 Comment Written 22-Jun-2023

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reply by the author on 22-Jun-2023

Thank you, I really appreciate hearing from you. :)

reply by Lisasview on 22-Jun-2023

You are so very welcome

Comment from Paul Manton

Excellent

Love this! Brilliant choice of illustration to go with a really optimistic and upbeat message. I don't think that 1-6-1 is easy, but I have seen some outstanding examples today - and this is one of them.
Great job.
Paul

 Comment Written 21-Jun-2023

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reply by the author on 22-Jun-2023

Thank you for this thoughtful review, it makes my day. :)

reply by Paul Manton on 22-Jun-2023

You're welcome.

Paul

Comment from Bill Schott

Excellent

This 1-6-1, You're Needed, has the proper formatting and reminds the readers that there are lots of opportunities out there to pitch in and help with.

 Comment Written 21-Jun-2023

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reply by the author on 22-Jun-2023

Thank you for taking the time to read my poem. :)

Comment from Sally Law

Excellent

A wonderful entry in this 1-6-1 rhyming contest, Mystery poet! I so enjoyed this and wish you all my best in the upcoming vote. Sending along my best today too,
Sally :))

 Comment Written 21-Jun-2023

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reply by the author on 22-Jun-2023

Thank you for this great review. :)

Comment from JSD

Excellent

This is a good example of this tiny task. Eight syllables! I like the way you have presented this. Colourful and fun. A great message too, clearly and effectively communicated.

 Comment Written 21-Jun-2023

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reply by the author on 22-Jun-2023

Thanks for this terrific review, it's very appreciated. :)