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Dad's Silly Games

1-6-1 contest entry

2 total reviews 
Comment from JSD
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A clever little piece. Coping well with the constraints of eight syllables; a pretty tough task. However, I really do worry about the health and safety risks of this advice. Possibly needs a warning on it?

 Comment Written 21-Jun-2023


reply by the author on 21-Jun-2023
    Lol. Maybe so. Thank you for the great review and stars, JSD. I really appreciate it, friend.
Comment from Paul Manton
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I am deeply ashamed to say that I laughed out loud at this outrageous advice - and if this is a real road accident, we should all be locked up as 'trolls'!
Now if you had substituted any number of politicians in the picture, I would have found another star from somewhere!
1-6-1 is a ridiculous form so making it this funny with a brilliantly spoofed picture is delightful. I wonder if all reviewers will be this lenient?
Paul

 Comment Written 21-Jun-2023


reply by the author on 21-Jun-2023
    Haha. Oh, I'm sure they won't be. Lol. I actually created this picture myself from 3 different pictures: The car, the buggy and the person flying. I love playing around in my art program nearly as much as writing dumb stuff to go with it. Lol. Thank you for the great review, Paul. That's all I was going for, so that someone on here besides myself might get a chuckle out of this ridiculous piece. I appreciate it, friend. Have a great night.
reply by Paul Manton on 21-Jun-2023
    You are welcome. Respect for your graphics skills! Good luck with future projects.
    Paul