Be Wee With Bea Part 3
Viewing comments for Chapter 23 "Wounded Moms"Third in a series is quite sad in the beginning.
6 total reviews
Comment from Douglas Goff
Well, I'm just gonna say it. We need to teach humans to work for "being good treats!"
This is cute with all the awesome characters and names. I think kids would love it.
Great job. A sixer all day long for me!
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reply by the author on 26-Jun-2023
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Well, I'm just gonna say it. We need to teach humans to work for "being good treats!"
This is cute with all the awesome characters and names. I think kids would love it.
Great job. A sixer all day long for me!
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Comment Written 26-Jun-2023
reply by the author on 26-Jun-2023
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OMG thank you for the shiny one. I like your prospect for humans. These thing all happened to my friends breaking up fights between their dogs. I will be relating my new problems with my new cat.
Comment from aryr
What a great continuation chapter, Liz. This was totally superb! This is an introduction of Sammy, the cat. Adventures are free range, which is to be expected. Very well done and greatly enjoyed. Blessings n Hugs!!!
reply by the author on 24-Jun-2023
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What a great continuation chapter, Liz. This was totally superb! This is an introduction of Sammy, the cat. Adventures are free range, which is to be expected. Very well done and greatly enjoyed. Blessings n Hugs!!!
Comment Written 23-Jun-2023
reply by the author on 24-Jun-2023
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Thank you for your appreciative review. I'm glad you are enjoying the series.
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Most welcome, Liz.
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***Smile***
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Even bigger smiles!!!
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Sweeet
Comment from JSD
Ooh. A bit violent perhaps for children? Definitely some 'mild peril' as the film-censors call it. Really enjoying the way you can take us into your world of cats and dogs.
reply by the author on 22-Jun-2023
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Ooh. A bit violent perhaps for children? Definitely some 'mild peril' as the film-censors call it. Really enjoying the way you can take us into your world of cats and dogs.
Comment Written 22-Jun-2023
reply by the author on 22-Jun-2023
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Thank you for your involved review. I'm glad you are enjoying the series.
Comment from lyenochka
It seems all the moms - Billie, Doolie, and Bea know what it is like to be torn between all the ones they have adopted when there is conflict, especially physical conflict among them. It does sound like the right solution to have Bea adopt Sammy. I like how important it was to Bea to give Sammy a name - just like the Maker has a name for each of us and He will reveal it to us on a white stone someday.
Punctuation suggestion:
around or in, the dumpsters. (no comma as it separates the preposition from its object)
reply by the author on 22-Jun-2023
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It seems all the moms - Billie, Doolie, and Bea know what it is like to be torn between all the ones they have adopted when there is conflict, especially physical conflict among them. It does sound like the right solution to have Bea adopt Sammy. I like how important it was to Bea to give Sammy a name - just like the Maker has a name for each of us and He will reveal it to us on a white stone someday.
Punctuation suggestion:
around or in, the dumpsters. (no comma as it separates the preposition from its object)
Comment Written 22-Jun-2023
reply by the author on 22-Jun-2023
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Sammy actually goes for walks with me. I slog (slow jog) along & he runs ahead & lies down in out dirt road waiting for me. I so grateful to my nunmate, Michele (Billie bear) for thinking of me. It was just as Sweet Puppy was was reserving his spot at the Rainbow Bridge. He is a bit of a handful as will be further addressed, butwe're working things out.
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I'm so glad! Those walking cat friends are the best!
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Maine Coons are alot like dogs. I miss Sweet Puppy so much, I'm so glad Sammy loves to walk.
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Maine Coons are huge! I met a lady who said her Maine Coon flicked his tail in her face (not intentionally) and broke her nose!
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OMG I'm getting my new camera figured out so I can put more recent pictures of Sammy on fb
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Comment from judith layne jerdé
This is amazing, Of course I become Teary-eyed as soon as I saw the rainbow bridge in the remarks. I love animals so much and the thought of losing one hurts my heart. You've done great job of introducing Sammy into the mix. I did get a little confused at the start because of all the action and names but I simply re-read the first couple of paragraphs. Animals have my heart and I love anything about them and the names for a quite cute in your story
reply by the author on 21-Jun-2023
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This is amazing, Of course I become Teary-eyed as soon as I saw the rainbow bridge in the remarks. I love animals so much and the thought of losing one hurts my heart. You've done great job of introducing Sammy into the mix. I did get a little confused at the start because of all the action and names but I simply re-read the first couple of paragraphs. Animals have my heart and I love anything about them and the names for a quite cute in your story
Comment Written 21-Jun-2023
reply by the author on 21-Jun-2023
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Thank you for your delightful reiew. This entire series is about me and my partner's & my animals. You are welcome to peruse any chapters in either Bea 1 ,2 or this 3. There is no need for reviews, just enjoy.
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Liz, Yes I definitely will read your previous chapters. You?re quite a wordsmith!
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***Smile
Comment from barbara.wilkey
Again, you present valuable lessons that children need to learn growing up. You introduce them with interesting characters who must work through similar lessons. Great job.
reply by the author on 21-Jun-2023
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Again, you present valuable lessons that children need to learn growing up. You introduce them with interesting characters who must work through similar lessons. Great job.
Comment Written 21-Jun-2023
reply by the author on 21-Jun-2023
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Thank you for your delightful review, I appreciate it. On another note, I once again thank you for calling my attention to my obsessive use of the unnecessary word "that." "That" is no longer in my vocabulary as it originally was.
