Wish It Were So
Why can't the world be at peace?3 total reviews
Comment from C. Gale Burnett
This is a wonderful entry for the contest. Beautiful presentation, well put together. You 1-6-1 made sense and flowed easily line to line. You accomplished purpose in this short poem; loved the message.
Gale
reply by the author on 22-Jun-2023
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This is a wonderful entry for the contest. Beautiful presentation, well put together. You 1-6-1 made sense and flowed easily line to line. You accomplished purpose in this short poem; loved the message.
Gale
Comment Written 22-Jun-2023
reply by the author on 22-Jun-2023
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Thanks for your read and feedback. Appreciated.
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You're so welcome.
Comment from Teri7
This is a very well written 1-6-1 poem you have penned that has very good rhyme and very good descriptive and meaningful words. It would be so nice to have peace in the world. Best wishes in the contest. Teri
reply by the author on 21-Jun-2023
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This is a very well written 1-6-1 poem you have penned that has very good rhyme and very good descriptive and meaningful words. It would be so nice to have peace in the world. Best wishes in the contest. Teri
Comment Written 21-Jun-2023
reply by the author on 21-Jun-2023
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Thanks for the read and the feedback. Peace to you.
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You are so welcome! Blessings, Teri
Comment from w.j.debi
It only it were true. We just have to keep working at it until someday it becomes reality.
Precise syllable count and excellent message.
Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 21-Jun-2023
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It only it were true. We just have to keep working at it until someday it becomes reality.
Precise syllable count and excellent message.
Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 21-Jun-2023
reply by the author on 21-Jun-2023
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Thanks for the read and the feedback. Peace to you.
