Drooling All Over
Warning: Staring too much at women2 total reviews
Comment from Paul Manton
Thanks, friend, for some timely advice in the area of self control. I always think that 1-6-1 poems are difficult, but I've seen several very funny ones today. Great visual to go with a rather humorous verse.
One of the best.
Paul
reply by the author on 21-Jun-2023
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Thanks, friend, for some timely advice in the area of self control. I always think that 1-6-1 poems are difficult, but I've seen several very funny ones today. Great visual to go with a rather humorous verse.
One of the best.
Paul
Comment Written 21-Jun-2023
reply by the author on 21-Jun-2023
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Thank you!
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You're welcome.
good luck with all your writing.
Paul
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Thank you for your kind review and the good luck! The same to you too, my friend!
Comment from JSD
Hilarious. Such a tiny box of eight syllables but you manage to fill it with wisdom and good advice. And it rhymes as well. An excellent little piece.
reply by the author on 21-Jun-2023
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Hilarious. Such a tiny box of eight syllables but you manage to fill it with wisdom and good advice. And it rhymes as well. An excellent little piece.
Comment Written 21-Jun-2023
reply by the author on 21-Jun-2023
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Thank you! I'm glad you think so.