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Comment from Mary Vigasin
Exceptional
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I love this. It is funny and cute.
I can picture a nose less snowman.
It is so Imaginative and creative
I got to give you a six.
Best wishes and regards
Mary

 Comment Written 17-Jun-2023


reply by the author on 18-Jun-2023
    Thank you, Gretchen. I appreciate the exceptional six stars review and kind words
    :)

    Gypsy hugs

    Gypsy hugs
Comment from aryr
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This was a great haiku, Gypsy. I enjoyed the dual pictures because they showed the raven who took his/her job to digest the nose of a snowman. Which evolved around your words. Blessed Be n Hugs!!!

 Comment Written 17-Jun-2023


reply by the author on 17-Jun-2023
    Hello,

    how are you doing? I hope you are having a wonderful weekend. Thank you for taking the time to read and review my poem.

    Gypsy hugs
reply by aryr on 17-Jun-2023
    You are so very welcome, Gypsy. I am doing fine and having a great weekend.
Comment from barbara.wilkey
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This must be raven week. LOL I am worried about that poor snowman's nose. I am sure with it being winter the raven's search for food is difficult. Thank you for sharing another fine packag.

 Comment Written 17-Jun-2023


reply by the author on 17-Jun-2023
    Hello,

    how are you doing? I hope you are having a wonderful weekend. Thank you for taking the time to read and review my poem.

    Gypsy hugs
Comment from shelley kaye
Exceptional
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LOL!! loved this one! i could totally see a noseless snowman and a bird having its breakfast!!

excellent haiku!
thank you for sharing
shelley :)




 Comment Written 17-Jun-2023


reply by the author on 17-Jun-2023
    Hello,

    Thank you for taking the time to read and review my poem. I appreciate your exceptional six stars!

    Gypsy hugs
Comment from Cindy Decker 2
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Gypsy,
I love the cute humor in your well-crafted Haiku.
In this poem the raven's character is a light one.
Nice graphics and image.
Good luck with all your writing, Gypsy!
Blessings and hugs,
Cindy

 Comment Written 17-Jun-2023


reply by the author on 17-Jun-2023
    Hello,

    how are you doing? I hope you are having a wonderful weekend. Thank you for taking the time to read and review my poem.

    Gypsy hugs
Comment from GWHARGIS
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Ok. Now you have me smiling. I like that the raven seems to have a sense of humor. Snowmen don't always need noses anyhow. Fun read. Thanks for sharing. Gretchen

 Comment Written 17-Jun-2023


reply by the author on 17-Jun-2023
    Hello,

    Thank you for taking the time to read and review my poem.

    Gypsy hugs
Comment from lyenochka
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Lol! That's so funny! I was wondering where he found that carrot but then it was winter and some kids made a snowman with a carrot nose. Enjoyed your fun poem!

 Comment Written 17-Jun-2023


reply by the author on 17-Jun-2023
    Thank you, after a heavy poem I wrote a couple of days ago, I thought I would lighten it up with a little humor.

    Thank you, I'm happy you like it. (*×*)

    Love,

    Marival ❤️
Comment from Alexandra Trovato
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VIRTUAL SIX STARS!
Cause and effect makes it's way to a haiku? I think lol
Beautiful poem simple yet descriptive. I realise i review like a writer but I'm learning. :)) Alexan

 Comment Written 17-Jun-2023


reply by the author on 17-Jun-2023
    You are fine (*×*) Alexan. :)

    Thank you very much for your time, kind review, and helpfull feedback.

    MariVal. :)
Comment from royowen
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Just love your grasp on words with the power to express the images of reason the paint a illustration of wonderful imprint on the psyche, well done Gypsy, blessings to you girl, blessings Roy

 Comment Written 17-Jun-2023


reply by the author on 17-Jun-2023
    Roy,

    Thank you very much for your time, kind review, and helpfull feedback.

    Gypsy hugs
reply by royowen on 17-Jun-2023
    Most welcome
Comment from AP Apgar
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I like your winter haiku- good picture presentation- very clever story lol. A mind teaser - particularly enjoy these kinds- half the time not understood even in the simplest form - oh well- good syllable count - flows well- good Job AP

 Comment Written 16-Jun-2023


reply by the author on 17-Jun-2023
    Thank you very much for your time, kind review, and helpfull feedback.

    Gypsy hugs