Searching For Solitude
Rhyming thoughts5 total reviews
Comment from NadineM
Well done! I really enjoyed your rhyming message about peace, song, joy, beauty, tranquility and simplicity. Oh, how wonderful the thought! To be called a dreamer may just be a compliment in the midst of today's chaos and stressors!! Your imagery is lovely. Melody was like a song itself! Thanks for sharing this special poem, Jewell! Hugs, Nadine xo
reply by the author on 20-Jun-2023
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Well done! I really enjoyed your rhyming message about peace, song, joy, beauty, tranquility and simplicity. Oh, how wonderful the thought! To be called a dreamer may just be a compliment in the midst of today's chaos and stressors!! Your imagery is lovely. Melody was like a song itself! Thanks for sharing this special poem, Jewell! Hugs, Nadine xo
Comment Written 19-Jun-2023
reply by the author on 20-Jun-2023
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Hello stranger!
Comment from rama devi
Lovely. Serenity is the best! This poem invokes it, and is thus a pleasure to read alo9ng with enjoying the resonant phrasing phonics, especially all the alliteration and also especially all the S Sounds.
Well rhymed and timed. Fluid flow. Great imagery!
Favorite lines:
Where quiet is the song that sings
In melodies where peace still rings
AND:
Would I hear the moon ascend
Or touch divinity's amend
AND:
Where introspection meets my whim
And the closing is a pitch perfect ending note - and great rhymes too, plus superb medley of M, B, L and S sounds:
To sing the song of morning's bliss
I close my eyes and reminisce
In memories made before my time
When life birthed love in plans sublime
Inspired!
Warmly, rd
reply by the author on 20-Jun-2023
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Lovely. Serenity is the best! This poem invokes it, and is thus a pleasure to read alo9ng with enjoying the resonant phrasing phonics, especially all the alliteration and also especially all the S Sounds.
Well rhymed and timed. Fluid flow. Great imagery!
Favorite lines:
Where quiet is the song that sings
In melodies where peace still rings
AND:
Would I hear the moon ascend
Or touch divinity's amend
AND:
Where introspection meets my whim
And the closing is a pitch perfect ending note - and great rhymes too, plus superb medley of M, B, L and S sounds:
To sing the song of morning's bliss
I close my eyes and reminisce
In memories made before my time
When life birthed love in plans sublime
Inspired!
Warmly, rd
Comment Written 17-Jun-2023
reply by the author on 20-Jun-2023
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Blessings! Thank you!
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Blessings!
Comment from hager
Somewhere within this pen beats life, whose seeds you spread, expressing the joy of life in meadows of flowery things, growing into memories God graced to us... long ago in time... Hi Beauty... bill
reply by the author on 20-Jun-2023
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Somewhere within this pen beats life, whose seeds you spread, expressing the joy of life in meadows of flowery things, growing into memories God graced to us... long ago in time... Hi Beauty... bill
Comment Written 17-Jun-2023
reply by the author on 20-Jun-2023
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Thank you!
Comment from ImaginosBuzzardoDesdinova
A very thoughtful poem. It speaks volumes about the poet's heart and feelings. I applaud your courage in expressing yourself so openly. I think that poets who share their deepest feelings are some of the bravest people.
reply by the author on 16-Jun-2023
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A very thoughtful poem. It speaks volumes about the poet's heart and feelings. I applaud your courage in expressing yourself so openly. I think that poets who share their deepest feelings are some of the bravest people.
Comment Written 16-Jun-2023
reply by the author on 16-Jun-2023
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Thanks
Comment from JSD
Your natural easy rhyme is excellent here, aided by a lilting rhythm. To seem to be so effortless is no mean feat. Your imagery is also very impressive. Well done. A great poem. Only a virtual 6 I'm afraid as I'm out of them! John
reply by the author on 16-Jun-2023
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Your natural easy rhyme is excellent here, aided by a lilting rhythm. To seem to be so effortless is no mean feat. Your imagery is also very impressive. Well done. A great poem. Only a virtual 6 I'm afraid as I'm out of them! John
Comment Written 16-Jun-2023
reply by the author on 16-Jun-2023
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Thanks John!
