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Super Pig and Evelyn Elf Owl

Super Pig saves a tiny lost owl

15 total reviews 
Comment from Lisasview
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What a wonderful ~ fun ~ children's story... will this story continue?
I want it to......
It brings out the little girl in me...................
Lisa, new to this site

 Comment Written 19-Jun-2023

reply by the author on 19-Jun-2023
    Welcome to FanStory Lisa. I love it here, you get to write and people read it! =} Yes, there's a second part. Do you know about the FanStory money you put on your stories? I think there is somewhere you can read about maybe under Community at the top of the page. Anyway, I will post Part 2 as soon as I get more funny money. =] Anyway I am glad you enjoyed it. Bringing out our inner little girl is never a bad thing. Thanks so much.
Comment from Paul Manton
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Great, Roxanna. I really like your characters and your story telling style. I have three books of poems and stories for children, about 'Charlie the Cat' (I put one on this site) so I know for sure that children will love 'Super Pig' - and I look forward to reading more of your stories in future.
Best wishes, Paul

 Comment Written 18-Jun-2023

reply by the author on 19-Jun-2023
    Thank you so much Paul. My Super Pig stories are very fun to write. I have the ending almost done so will post as soon as I get enough 'Money' to promote it. =] I'll have to look for Charlie the Cat. Sounds fun.
Comment from royowen
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What a very cute story dear Rox. You're a great scribal raconteur Rox, and I'm sure that that the little ones would love to read this. I'm sure your super Pig series is a goodie dear Rox, and your adult series are good also, well done, blessings Roy

 Comment Written 15-Jun-2023

reply by the author on 17-Jun-2023
    Thank you so much Roy.
reply by royowen on 17-Jun-2023
    A pleasure
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
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A lovely children's story Roxanna and I loved this innocence in these words, I am glad you consider the pig to be a super pig, ha ha ha, a fun post, much enjoyed, love Dolly x

 Comment Written 15-Jun-2023

reply by the author on 17-Jun-2023
    Thanks so much. Super Pig was very fun to write and worth every penny I put into it, even though I didn't get rich. =]
Comment from jmdg1954
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Yeah.... Welcome back Super Pig.

Oh Rox, these were some of my favorite reads back before I left for what turned out to be 6 years.

This makes me happy!

Cheers, my friend.

John

 Comment Written 15-Jun-2023

reply by the author on 17-Jun-2023
    I leave and come back all the time. Once you start writing, it's very hard to give up. =] Thanks so much, SP was my favorite thing to write. Thank for the 6 starts too.
reply by jmdg1954 on 17-Jun-2023
    My pleasure?
Comment from w.j.debi
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You've created some endearing creatures. I hope Evelyn and her mother are reunited. Pinky Pig seems determined to help and, evidently, has super powers that will assist. I look forward to readiing more.

 Comment Written 15-Jun-2023

reply by the author on 17-Jun-2023
    Super Pig with find Emily, Evelyn's mommy. She never fails. =} Thank so much and for the 6 stars.
Comment from Ulla
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Aw, Roxanna, this little story tore at my heartstrings. I love owls, and I want everything to be okay for little Evelynn.
I've never heard about Elf Owls before. It very interesting. Where I live here in Spain it's the huge white owl that is common. I love the hoot. Ulla:)))

 Comment Written 15-Jun-2023

reply by the author on 17-Jun-2023
    I had not heard of this owl either. They are so tiny, I'm amazed they aren't endangered, everything can eat them. Thanks so much.
Comment from Teri7
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This is a very cute story about super pig and Evelyn elf owl. You used very good descriptive words and very sweet imagery. I used to collect owl figurines at one time in my life. Thank you for sharing. love and blessings Teri

 Comment Written 15-Jun-2023

reply by the author on 17-Jun-2023
    Thank you so much Teri.
Comment from Michele Harber
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I'm happy to see another Super Pig story, Rox. I've never heard of an Elf Owl, but Evelyn sounds adorable. I can actually see her as a recurring character, sort of a Robin to Super Pig's Batman. I'm looking forward to the next installment, to see how everyone's favorite superhero solves the problem.

 Comment Written 15-Jun-2023

reply by the author on 17-Jun-2023
    I've not heard of this Owl either. They are so tiny. I couldn't find how tiny the babies much be, so made up size and weight, but I figure it much be close. =] I'd love to see one. Thanks so much Michele.
reply by Michele Harber on 17-Jun-2023
    You're very welcome. He certainly looked adorable in the picture.
Comment from patcelaw
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I very much enjoyed your story here. I also was in enamored with the notes that you wrote at the end about the little Al and I did not know that there was such a small owl and the nature. Thanks for sharing it with us. Patricia

 Comment Written 15-Jun-2023

reply by the author on 17-Jun-2023
    I didn't know about these tiny guys either. I came across them online. Thanks so much Pat.