Comment from Janet Rank Spaletto

Exceptional

Very imaginative capturing all those mysteries and emotions of dreams through the wanderings of a Dream Phantom into the dreams of others. Brilliant characterization.

 Comment Written 29-Jun-2023

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reply by the author on 17-Jul-2023

Thank you for the six-star review and kink words.

Comment from C. Gale Burnett

Excellent

The perfect 'Dream Story' for the contest. A phantom peering into dreams looking for a lost love. You had me hanging on to the edge of my seat. I thoroughly enjoyed where your imagination took you. Great imagery.

 Comment Written 28-Jun-2023

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reply by the author on 17-Jul-2023

Thank you for taking your time to review my story.

Comment from evilynne

Exceptional

Oh, my - that is a fascinating well told story of love lost. It had a bit of everything and is quite fascinating. I could not stop reading this. Best of luck in the contest!

 Comment Written 21-Jun-2023

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reply by the author on 21-Jun-2023

Thank you, Evilynne, so much for the six-star review. It is much appreciated. I am glad you enjoyed the story.

May the Lord bless you richly,
Pen

Comment from JSD

Excellent

Ooh. Very spooky. I love the narrative here and the way the character can wander into dreams and examine them, and then there is a lovely, if sad twist. Really effective idea, well told.

 Comment Written 19-Jun-2023

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reply by the author on 17-Jul-2023

I am not sure I thanked you for your review. Thank you. It was much appreciated.

Comment from JT traveller

Excellent

Fantastic story. Such a great dream. You have a wonderful imagination. I thoroughly enjoyed reading your work, there were so many twists and turns it kept me engaged to the very end. Jacqueline

 Comment Written 18-Jun-2023

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reply by the author on 21-Jun-2023

Thank you for taking the time to read my story. I am glad you liked my story.

May the Lord bless you richly,
Pen

reply by JT traveller on 21-Jun-2023

Thank you, Pen. Have a fantastic year. Jacqueline