Comment from shelley kaye

Excellent

love that second picture! i can almost hear it!

great love tanka with good imagistic word choices - love the second line!

thank you for sharing!
shelley :)

 Comment Written 15-Jun-2023

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reply by the author on 15-Jun-2023

Thank you, Shelley, I appreciate your kind review. Have a wonderful day.

Gypsy hugs

Comment from barbara.wilkey

Excellent

see-through clothes
revealing our flourishing love (These lines are a perfect visual image. Once again, you did a wonderful job describing the passion, yet keeping it innocent. You're great.

 Comment Written 15-Jun-2023

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reply by the author on 15-Jun-2023

Thank you, Barbara, I appreciate your kind review. It means a lot coming from you. Have a wonderful day.

Gypsy hugs

Comment from AP Apgar

Excellent

Like your tanks poem- nice picture presentation- syllable count - 5/6/5/4/8??
Double check- interesting story - see through clothes gives a good visual!- good job AP

 Comment Written 15-Jun-2023

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reply by the author on 15-Jun-2023

Hello, AP,

Thank you for catching that syllable count error.

Thank you for taking the time to read and review my poem. Have a wonderful day.

Gypsy hugs

Comment from lyenochka

Excellent

Oh my! The lovers have turned up the heat. And the rain has made the clothes even more revealing. I like the water imagery as their passions flow into each other.

 Comment Written 14-Jun-2023

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reply by the author on 14-Jun-2023

LoL, sorry, big sister. I found the picture first so it's the photographer fault.

Thank you very much, love you.

Marival ❤️

Comment from aryr

Excellent

This a great tanka, Gypsy. The dual pictures indicated the falling rain which increased there passion. Your words was the drive beyond the drive, not only was there passion but desire. Blessed Be n Hugs!!!

 Comment Written 14-Jun-2023

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reply by the author on 14-Jun-2023

Thank you very much for your time, kind review, and helpfull feedback. Blessed be.

Gypsy hug

reply by aryr on 15-Jun-2023

Most welcome, Gypsy.

Comment from Jumbo J

Excellent

Hi Reina Gitana,
hot-hot-hot!
I'm too much of a imaginative image person to not have this poem and its words swirl in my mind... and I guess the picture you chose to accompany this poem helps the fire of desire.

I love that you go there, as there is no more potent poetry than love and contact itself.

Hmmmmm, I better leave it there, I feeling a tad light-headed...smile((((((.

With our thoughts we create...
the perfection of purity.

Warm regards,
James.

 Comment Written 14-Jun-2023

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reply by the author on 14-Jun-2023

Hahaha... thank you, James. I'm grateful that you took the time to read and review my hot poetry ;)

Besitos, guapo,

Gypsy Queen
"There is no end. There is no beginning. There is only the passion of life." - Federico Fellini

Comment from patcelaw

Excellent

I enjoyed this poem very much it flows well it's beautifully presented and it's another one of your lovely works of art.,may you be blessed. Patricia.

 Comment Written 14-Jun-2023

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reply by the author on 14-Jun-2023

Thank you very much for your time, kind review, and helpfull feedback.

Gypsy hug

Comment from GWHARGIS

Excellent

This was steamy. From the text to the picture. Why is it that seeing people kiss in the rain is so appealing. Loved this. Your word choice was excellent. Thank you for posting. Gretchen

 Comment Written 14-Jun-2023

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reply by the author on 14-Jun-2023

Thank you, Gretchen, I appreciate your kind review.

Gypsy hugs