Be Wee With Bea Part 3
Viewing comments for Chapter 22 "Osala bear"Third in a series is quite sad in the beginning.
12 total reviews
Comment from Cindy Decker 2
Liz,
Your writing is unique; I didn't get it at first, but the metaphor is sweet and appealing.
It's a darling story, covering a life more complex than is portrayed here.
I really enjoyed it.
Good luck with this and all your writing.
Blessings,
Cindy
reply by the author on 29-Jun-2023
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Liz,
Your writing is unique; I didn't get it at first, but the metaphor is sweet and appealing.
It's a darling story, covering a life more complex than is portrayed here.
I really enjoyed it.
Good luck with this and all your writing.
Blessings,
Cindy
Comment Written 28-Jun-2023
reply by the author on 29-Jun-2023
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Thank you for your delightful review. I'm glad you are getting it, Yes, this is an autobiographical allegory about me and my animals & a few people in my life. This book unlike the first 2 addresses the pain of my losses. But finally, I have my cat Sammy, a bit of a challenge, but I love him.
Comment from judith layne jerdé
Liz, Very compelling, your depiction of the one kitty still moving and his mother and two sisters having crossed over the Rainbow Bridge made me cry
reply by the author on 22-Jun-2023
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Liz, Very compelling, your depiction of the one kitty still moving and his mother and two sisters having crossed over the Rainbow Bridge made me cry
Comment Written 21-Jun-2023
reply by the author on 22-Jun-2023
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Thank you for your supportive review. It turned out, the little (never) Maine Coon wasthe only left. The caring women got him to a vet and saved his life. He's been a challenge as will be revealed in the next chapters, but I love him.
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Awww... That truly hurts
my heart. I love Maine Coons. Poor baby probably has PTSD. Animals know so much more than we keep them credit for. Thank you for sharing.
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Awww... That truly hurts
my heart. I love Maine Coons. Poor baby probably has PTSD. Animals know so much more than we keep them credit for. Thank you for sharing.
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He has major PTSD
Comment from Lisasview
Wonderful line...Tears on our cheeks to feel the rainbows in our hearts....
I loved so much about your story...
Thank you for sharing it............
Lisa, new to this site
reply by the author on 19-Jun-2023
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Wonderful line...Tears on our cheeks to feel the rainbows in our hearts....
I loved so much about your story...
Thank you for sharing it............
Lisa, new to this site
Comment Written 19-Jun-2023
reply by the author on 19-Jun-2023
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Thank you for the lovely review. It brings sunshine. Someone else new to the group gave me 3 stars. I don't think anyone on here deserves a mark equal to a C. Now I've vented to you as a welcome...bwaaa. Actually that person had not even written ANYTHING. I am happy to help new comers. I had some caring people who have slowly shown me the ropes.
If you feel lost as to the procedure here. I am happy to give you the shortcuts for making member dollars.
You are welcome to read any of my stuff without needing to write reviews. Just enjoy.
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Wow a 3... which poem was that for? I want to read it and be honest with you... I am a good editor if need be... Also, lets be fans okay....
And, yes, I would love to know your thoughts and could use the help...
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It was the chapter you just read in Be Wee With Bea... ch called Osala bear
Comment from Claire Duggan
I enjoyed the symbolism behind how the hearts are like a cave, showing the hollowness in their hearts without their loved ones. Honestly I feel if you went into deeper detail, it would be a way of keeping the reader engages as well as add imagery to the story.
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reply by the author on 19-Jun-2023
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I enjoyed the symbolism behind how the hearts are like a cave, showing the hollowness in their hearts without their loved ones. Honestly I feel if you went into deeper detail, it would be a way of keeping the reader engages as well as add imagery to the story.
This rating does not count towards story rating or author rank.
The highest and the lowest rating are not included in calculations.
Comment Written 19-Jun-2023
reply by the author on 19-Jun-2023
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Thank you for your interested review. It is difficult coming in cold. I'm not sure why you gave me a mark equal to a C in class. This is more than average writing. This is the 3rd in a series with the reading audience around grade 4+
& the age of about 9+ years old. The 1st two are on Amazon.
I'm glad you liked the metaphors. I love using metaphors.
Comment from eliz100
This is another excellent chapter. The sense of loss comes through loud and clear. I look forward to the next chapter. I do not see any room for improvement. Have a blessed day.
reply by the author on 18-Jun-2023
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This is another excellent chapter. The sense of loss comes through loud and clear. I look forward to the next chapter. I do not see any room for improvement. Have a blessed day.
Comment Written 18-Jun-2023
reply by the author on 18-Jun-2023
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Thank you for your appreciative review.
Comment from JSD
Lovely anthropomorphic writing - I think that's the right word - and a perfect tone for children. I really enjoyed this little world and the subtle introduction of fear throughout is most effective.
reply by the author on 16-Jun-2023
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Lovely anthropomorphic writing - I think that's the right word - and a perfect tone for children. I really enjoyed this little world and the subtle introduction of fear throughout is most effective.
Comment Written 16-Jun-2023
reply by the author on 16-Jun-2023
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Thank you for your delightful review.
Comment from Carol Hillebrenner
The little kitty they found certainly had his problems. His decision to be a bully gets him sent to another home where he was less likely to bully. But he was certainly not nice to Jazzy in his new home.
reply by the author on 14-Jun-2023
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The little kitty they found certainly had his problems. His decision to be a bully gets him sent to another home where he was less likely to bully. But he was certainly not nice to Jazzy in his new home.
Comment Written 14-Jun-2023
reply by the author on 14-Jun-2023
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Thank you for your appreciative review. This is close to fact. He is 5 years old, was only 5 weeks old. He is still quite feral but we are bonding. He's a big Maine Coon like Scruffles my 1st cat was. He'd definitely take Jazzy down now.
Comment from aryr
This definitely was a great continuation chapter, Liz. Bea and Billie met with Osala and kitty Osala but they were at the hands of a bully, which was fixed substantially. I praise the others- Billie, Jazzy, Scruffles, Sweet Puppy, Annie, and Stormy. They were all part and parcel in this. Blessings n Hugs!!!
reply by the author on 14-Jun-2023
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This definitely was a great continuation chapter, Liz. Bea and Billie met with Osala and kitty Osala but they were at the hands of a bully, which was fixed substantially. I praise the others- Billie, Jazzy, Scruffles, Sweet Puppy, Annie, and Stormy. They were all part and parcel in this. Blessings n Hugs!!!
Comment Written 14-Jun-2023
reply by the author on 14-Jun-2023
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Thank you for your involved review. I'm glad you are enjoying it.
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You are most welcome, Liz.
Comment from lyenochka
More new characters! I wasn't quite sure about the rescued kitty and I'm a little confused about Osala and the kitty with the same name. Could the kitty have a variation like Osalita or something?
But I really liked "how there needed to be tears on our cheeks to feel the rainbow in our hearts." And it's so good that both Billie and Bea have such big hearts!
Comments:
Her mom double-check to see (double-checked)
Osala set him carefully onto the soft cedar bows (boughs?)
reply by the author on 14-Jun-2023
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More new characters! I wasn't quite sure about the rescued kitty and I'm a little confused about Osala and the kitty with the same name. Could the kitty have a variation like Osalita or something?
But I really liked "how there needed to be tears on our cheeks to feel the rainbow in our hearts." And it's so good that both Billie and Bea have such big hearts!
Comments:
Her mom double-check to see (double-checked)
Osala set him carefully onto the soft cedar bows (boughs?)
Comment Written 14-Jun-2023
reply by the author on 14-Jun-2023
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Thank you for your involved review. OMG of course it is 'boughs. I'll have to check if I've spelled it like that any other place. bwaaa. When I asked the woman who rescued my cat the names for her & her kitty. She requested Osala for both. This all happened. My Sammy was very feral & rough with both Osala & her kitty and over whelming for my nunmate Michele (Billie bear) & her dog Jazzy.
Comment from barbara.wilkey
Thank you for sharing this post with us. I can't wait to read what's going to happen next.
Billie bear (I'm curious. If Billie Bear, is his name, then the entire name should be capitalized, if not, then it's okay as is.)
reply by the author on 14-Jun-2023
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Thank you for sharing this post with us. I can't wait to read what's going to happen next.
Billie bear (I'm curious. If Billie Bear, is his name, then the entire name should be capitalized, if not, then it's okay as is.)
Comment Written 14-Jun-2023
reply by the author on 14-Jun-2023
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Thank you for your appreciative review. I'm glad you are enjoying it.
