Passion For Poetry
Viewing comments for Chapter 6 "Conundrum "Book 3 of assorted poems
7 total reviews
Comment from Nicki Nance
This four liner is rich in imagery. The message metaphorically took me to the hundreds of situations where a boundary isn't the separation of two entities as much as the integration of a third entity. How that simplifies and complicates things.
reply by the author on 22-Aug-2023
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This four liner is rich in imagery. The message metaphorically took me to the hundreds of situations where a boundary isn't the separation of two entities as much as the integration of a third entity. How that simplifies and complicates things.
Comment Written 21-Aug-2023
reply by the author on 22-Aug-2023
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Yes thank you so much! Your insight us great! I appreciate your time and effort! Hope you enjoy your day!
Comment from jim vecchio
It's hard to believe you presented such a beautiful image in just four lines! But, I didn't see anything about corn in a drum. Only kidding! Earth is much higher percentage of sea than land, so it would make perfect sense that the land would be viewed as "ocean's conundrum".
reply by the author on 21-Aug-2023
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It's hard to believe you presented such a beautiful image in just four lines! But, I didn't see anything about corn in a drum. Only kidding! Earth is much higher percentage of sea than land, so it would make perfect sense that the land would be viewed as "ocean's conundrum".
Comment Written 21-Aug-2023
reply by the author on 21-Aug-2023
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Lol. Thank you Jim! I very much appreciate your kind words and review. I'm very glad you like it! I hope you have a great day!
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Any day I can read one of your works is a great day!!
Comment from Lisasview
Another wonderful poem from you!!
I wish you the best of luck in the contest.
Lea, I have posted a couple new poems I think you might like....
Lisasview
reply by the author on 20-Jun-2023
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Another wonderful poem from you!!
I wish you the best of luck in the contest.
Lea, I have posted a couple new poems I think you might like....
Lisasview
Comment Written 20-Jun-2023
reply by the author on 20-Jun-2023
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Ty and perfect! I'll be sure to read! Thank you for your kind comments and review! Have an awesome night!
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Morning here in Spain... birds are signing...
Lisa
Comment from Jasmine Girl
I like the unique description in this poem. The Satori is very interesting. I invited friends to my condo on Lake Superior and every day we look out the window and see the sea-land merging into one. It's very calming.
Well done.
reply by the author on 14-Jun-2023
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I like the unique description in this poem. The Satori is very interesting. I invited friends to my condo on Lake Superior and every day we look out the window and see the sea-land merging into one. It's very calming.
Well done.
Comment Written 13-Jun-2023
reply by the author on 14-Jun-2023
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Thank you Jasmine....glad u liked it! Thank you so much. Thank you so much for your review and awesome comments and for your time is always I am grateful. Thank you having an awesome day!
Comment from JSD
This is so good Lea. Once again your economy of expression makes me gasp. Love the splitting of the jade belly! And in the midst is the history of the making of the world! And, Conundrum is such a good word. Well done! (A couple of typos need correcting - I've sent you a message.) John x
reply by the author on 13-Jun-2023
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This is so good Lea. Once again your economy of expression makes me gasp. Love the splitting of the jade belly! And in the midst is the history of the making of the world! And, Conundrum is such a good word. Well done! (A couple of typos need correcting - I've sent you a message.) John x
Comment Written 13-Jun-2023
reply by the author on 13-Jun-2023
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Done and correct it thank you so much for your kind review once again You rock my world how's running out the door to pick up? My friend from the. Hospital too quick. Thank you again for your review glad you like it. I hope the rest of your day is amazing.!
Comment from Mario PIERRE
Hi Lea,
Usually I quickly understand all what you write and I specifically like your poems. I have to admit that this one left some questions I need to ask you:
Did you mean 'ocean's conundrum?
Also I couldn't find the meaning of ' begon'... I know ' begone'...
Lastly, did you mean: 'where many say'...?
Thank you for clarifying!!!
Mario
reply by the author on 13-Jun-2023
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Hi Lea,
Usually I quickly understand all what you write and I specifically like your poems. I have to admit that this one left some questions I need to ask you:
Did you mean 'ocean's conundrum?
Also I couldn't find the meaning of ' begon'... I know ' begone'...
Lastly, did you mean: 'where many say'...?
Thank you for clarifying!!!
Mario
Comment Written 13-Jun-2023
reply by the author on 13-Jun-2023
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I'm audio yeah you're exactly right? Too busy running out the door pick up my friend from the hospital and quickly submitted when I should have stopped and looked so thank you for catching that. It's now corrected to care to have a peak. Thank you so much again I appreciate you in all your comments. Thank you again have a great day!
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All is great!!!
❤️
Mario
Comment from Dr. Nad
Well, I guess I never thought of the ocean coexisting with the land with contentiousness. But now that you mention it, if someone split my belly, I would have consternation about that lol. interesting.
reply by the author on 13-Jun-2023
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Well, I guess I never thought of the ocean coexisting with the land with contentiousness. But now that you mention it, if someone split my belly, I would have consternation about that lol. interesting.
Comment Written 13-Jun-2023
reply by the author on 13-Jun-2023
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L o l ha ha ha yes exactly it would be a conundrum! Thank you for your review I appreciate it very much And your comments make me trouble thank you again hope your day is great!